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Clairenix
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 12:55 am    Post subject: My newest~! Reply with quote

http://clairenix.deviantart.com/art/A-white-dress-140765894


I took a different style of shading and IMO it looks alot better.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nose and mouth do not fit style, other parts of anatomy are not symmetrical. Even if accounting for angle. Work on the chest. Nice shading though. Also, wrists to thick for hands.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

r34p3r wrote:
Nose and mouth do not fit style, other parts of anatomy are not symmetrical. Even if accounting for angle. Work on the chest. Nice shading though. Also, wrists to thick for hands.


=O not sure how to do the nose and about the mouth what should I do?
also thanks.~

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Look at others. You could also get rid of them completely. But since your going for a certain look, follow others.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 3:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, aight' then. Thanks alot.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 5:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thats epic, but what's with the mouth O_o
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 5:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

.hkkx wrote:
Thats epic, but what's with the mouth O_o

;_; I know. I need to learn more but this is all I can do atm.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 5:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

poor job on the body structure.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

French mustache syndrome yet again.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 10:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

r34p3r wrote:
Nose and mouth do not fit style, other parts of anatomy are not symmetrical. Even if accounting for angle. Work on the chest. Nice shading though. Also, wrists to thick for hands.


i agree with him except the nose get rid of that re-do it but with a different aproach to it also the smile its a bit weird and u wont find many smiles like that, the mouth should look like its almost connected and the end of the smile shouldnt be too high up~ if u redo it like that it should look already better also the head its on a sorta weird pose i mean, it looks like you're trying to shift it closer to someone to be like right in their face and its more on the angle of just straight forward and u did it sorta to the side Surprised

sorry for the big wall of text.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 12:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it looks nice :]

The mouth is a tad strange though Razz
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 1:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Redo face and hands and its pretty good.

a good technique to avoid drawing hands (( because its very hard )) is to make her put her hands behind in a cute looking pose .
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think you should redo the whole thing.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 3:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dillonz wrote:
I think you should redo the whole thing.
A bit mean. Its okay Though Good job use more tuts ect. lalala lol
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 4:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

H-Her hands... ;;

Disregarding that, you've improved quite a bit. My other concerns have already been voiced by previous users, but I couldn't help commenting on the hands. :<
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