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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:02 am Post subject: |
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Nose and mouth do not fit style, other parts of anatomy are not symmetrical. Even if accounting for angle. Work on the chest. Nice shading though. Also, wrists to thick for hands.
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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r34p3r wrote: | Nose and mouth do not fit style, other parts of anatomy are not symmetrical. Even if accounting for angle. Work on the chest. Nice shading though. Also, wrists to thick for hands. |
=O not sure how to do the nose and about the mouth what should I do?
also thanks.~
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:45 am Post subject: |
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Look at others. You could also get rid of them completely. But since your going for a certain look, follow others.
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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Oh, aight' then. Thanks alot.
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 5:27 am Post subject: |
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Thats epic, but what's with the mouth O_o
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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.hkkx wrote: | Thats epic, but what's with the mouth O_o |
;_; I know. I need to learn more but this is all I can do atm.
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zyndr0m I post too much
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 5:32 am Post subject: |
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poor job on the body structure.
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:12 am Post subject: |
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French mustache syndrome yet again.
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Big Pun Expert Cheater
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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I think it looks nice :]
The mouth is a tad strange though
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 1:45 pm Post subject: |
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Redo face and hands and its pretty good.
a good technique to avoid drawing hands (( because its very hard )) is to make her put her hands behind in a cute looking pose .
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I think you should redo the whole thing.
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Dillonz wrote: | I think you should redo the whole thing. | A bit mean. Its okay Though Good job use more tuts ect. lalala lol
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Simon :v Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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H-Her hands... ;;
Disregarding that, you've improved quite a bit. My other concerns have already been voiced by previous users, but I couldn't help commenting on the hands. :<
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