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onidiablo
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:46 pm    Post subject: Gunslinger girl drawing Reply with quote

i sketched it then coloured it in on photoshop


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

nice that looks really cool

PS: wholy shit thats hight res

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PS: wholy shit thats hight res

yeah lol
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 6:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Its not bad.

Only complaint is that for whatever reason from my perspective it looks like a little girl. O-o

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sharpies! wrote:
Its not bad.

Only complaint is that for whatever reason from my perspective it looks like a little girl. O-o
Probably due to the absence of a neck.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AK Sniper Rifle. haha

I like it. Smile

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, you'll want to fix some of the proportions. The head seems too big, and as Admin pointed out, the lack of a neck worsens it.

It's called an SVD (Dragunov) by the way.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Other than below, it's rather good, the posture is fairly realistic, and it's better than my sniper pose. Also shade the clothes if you can.


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PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

its ok but I would recommend you to work a lot more in the sketching before start coloring.

constructive critics:

1) Face, you know what you have to do .... (Redo it all)

2) you did an excellent work with your characters left hand, the right hand looks odd

3) if your character is flat shaded why your weapon is beveled ?

4) weapon should have perfect straight and curve lines everywhere and not that messy pulse curves.

5) hair is too simple like to try and go into so much detail in shape like you tried. you should draw minimum detail on hair strands and then do the details at the shading and coloring.


6) the pose is kind of wrong, when holding a rifle you hold the weight of it with the right shoulder lowering it a little and raising your left shoulder leaning a bit up and forth as you aim so neck shouldn't be omitted.

7) where FaecTrull said "A humans Join is not that pointy" , lies, its ok just add some lines there to simulate the cloth folding and its ok.

hope it helps.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sharpies! wrote:
Its not bad.

Only complaint is that for whatever reason from my perspective it looks like a little girl. O-o


Thats because it is a girl lol
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 4:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sharpies! wrote:
Its not bad.

Only complaint is that for whatever reason from my perspective it looks like a little girl. O-o

In the anime "Gunslinger girl". Little girls actually use guns. :3

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 5:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice drawing, Looks sweet.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 3:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cool, the shading, however, looks slightly off on the girl though.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 6:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote


Now that I know who you're trying to draw, I can tell you this. It looks very off. Try making in more detailed.
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