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onidiablo Cheater
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:46 pm Post subject: Gunslinger girl drawing |
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i sketched it then coloured it in on photoshop
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rayz321 Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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nice that looks really cool
PS: wholy shit thats hight res
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onidiablo Cheater
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:19 pm Post subject: |
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Quote: | PS: wholy shit thats hight res |
yeah lol
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 6:23 pm Post subject: |
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Its not bad.
Only complaint is that for whatever reason from my perspective it looks like a little girl. O-o
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:22 pm Post subject: |
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Sharpies! wrote: | Its not bad.
Only complaint is that for whatever reason from my perspective it looks like a little girl. O-o | Probably due to the absence of a neck.
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:20 pm Post subject: |
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AK Sniper Rifle. haha
I like it.
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superweapons Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:22 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, you'll want to fix some of the proportions. The head seems too big, and as Admin pointed out, the lack of a neck worsens it.
It's called an SVD (Dragunov) by the way.
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Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:58 pm Post subject: |
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Other than below, it's rather good, the posture is fairly realistic, and it's better than my sniper pose. Also shade the clothes if you can.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:45 am Post subject: |
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its ok but I would recommend you to work a lot more in the sketching before start coloring.
constructive critics:
1) Face, you know what you have to do .... (Redo it all)
2) you did an excellent work with your characters left hand, the right hand looks odd
3) if your character is flat shaded why your weapon is beveled ?
4) weapon should have perfect straight and curve lines everywhere and not that messy pulse curves.
5) hair is too simple like to try and go into so much detail in shape like you tried. you should draw minimum detail on hair strands and then do the details at the shading and coloring.
6) the pose is kind of wrong, when holding a rifle you hold the weight of it with the right shoulder lowering it a little and raising your left shoulder leaning a bit up and forth as you aim so neck shouldn't be omitted.
7) where FaecTrull said "A humans Join is not that pointy" , lies, its ok just add some lines there to simulate the cloth folding and its ok.
hope it helps.
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onidiablo Cheater
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:52 am Post subject: |
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Sharpies! wrote: | Its not bad.
Only complaint is that for whatever reason from my perspective it looks like a little girl. O-o |
Thats because it is a girl lol
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 4:43 am Post subject: |
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Sharpies! wrote: | Its not bad.
Only complaint is that for whatever reason from my perspective it looks like a little girl. O-o |
In the anime "Gunslinger girl". Little girls actually use guns. :3
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 5:49 am Post subject: |
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Nice drawing, Looks sweet.
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 3:34 pm Post subject: |
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cool, the shading, however, looks slightly off on the girl though.
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Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 6:34 pm Post subject: |
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Now that I know who you're trying to draw, I can tell you this. It looks very off. Try making in more detailed.
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