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		| CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
 
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				|  Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 9:23 am    Post subject: Night Platformer Game Assets. |   |  
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				| Looking for constructive criticism. I was quite happy with how it turned out but I felt like something was off. What do you guys think? 
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		| gogodr I post too much
 
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				|  Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 3:42 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| I see discrepancy in the amount of detail in some assets. Even though I'm not really digging that theme, I get it. Doodly slightly creepy style.
 Reminds me of what we used to expect from good flash games.
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		| CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
 
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				|  Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 8:25 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				|  	  | gogodr wrote: |  	  | I see discrepancy in the amount of detail in some assets. Even though I'm not really digging that theme, I get it. Doodly slightly creepy style.
 Reminds me of what we used to expect from good flash games.
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 True that, but style overall kind of helped ignore it. I could always go back and give it a polish but lately I just want to do and release.
 
 Sort of, I always liked it(especially in animation) but it was actually a natural process(not forced or anything, but I guess that's what I draw like) I haven't been part of this scene in a long time. What would be a game with a current trending style or what can you show me to catch up in all these last years in terms of 2D web/mobile games?
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		| gogodr I post too much
 
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		| CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
 
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				|  Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 9:36 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Ahh I was talking more specific and now. I've seen those games and not really what I was asking. Although those styles are the most selling ones now right?
 I made this gui pack to test the waters and got 20 sales so far so I guess that style sells.
 
   
 
 I still rather continue doing what I'm doing since it's natural and the style will always adapt to how I feel like drawing in the moment. Maybe I can fuse it with flat designs and create something different but still sort of in trend.
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		| gogodr I post too much
 
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				|  Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2015 8:44 am    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Yep, that's the style that sells the most currently. Though it is not a perfect formula.
 
 Instead of doing  shots in the dark (if you are working on this rather than doing it for practice and/or recreation value), if I were you I would do a couple of style reference sheets and work on complete packs upon requests.
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		| finnegan waking up How do I cheat?
 
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				|  Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2015 2:36 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| i'm really glad to see more stuff from you, cris. this is lovely |  | 
	
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		| BreakinGods How do I cheat?
 
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				|  Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2015 6:05 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| I like the animation style, but the colors could be more visually pleasing. |  | 
	
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		| CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
 
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				|  Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2015 1:09 am    Post subject: |   |  
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				|  	  | BreakinGods wrote: |  	  | I like the animation style, but the colors could be more visually pleasing. | 
 Thanks, thats true! Mainly for selling though, I think I like them being unpleasant if I continue using them for something personal. It was kind of on theme with what I was thinking when I made it.
 
 
  	  | greatsage wrote: |  	  | i'm really glad to see more stuff from you, cris. this is lovely | 
 Thanks man, means a lot. I'll start posting more stuff soon.
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