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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 5:33 pm Post subject: Drawing a cat, can I get some feedback? |
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Am I on the right path? |
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Fafaffy Cheater
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 5:35 pm Post subject: |
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Put a tail on it.
Not just any tail...
THE tail _________________
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 7:19 pm Post subject: |
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ok, I need to refine a lot now. |
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Phox I post too much
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 7:44 pm Post subject: |
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Those eyes are fucked. Look up some cat eyes.
The rest is awesome though. |
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 7:56 pm Post subject: |
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xD thanks, I knew about the eyes.
I like this ones. I did some research
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refined a little more
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clash of clans hacks Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 3:30 am Post subject: |
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| It has no butt. |
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 4:15 am Post subject: |
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The base of the tail is too high up. Thus giving it the illusion of, as adnihil stated, having no butt. If that's not supposed to be the tail, then perhaps redoing the back end would be best. If the cat is supposed to be sort of leaning on one leg then the other leg would be extended and at least part of the back paw would be visible on the other side.
Other than that it still looks like a work in progress and I'm not really one to critique a work in progress. _________________
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paupav Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 6:25 am Post subject: |
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If you are asking about details, ears are not the same.
Last edited by paupav on Thu Mar 27, 2014 6:55 am; edited 1 time in total |
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potaters Grandmaster Cheater
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| Rare 2-legged cat. |
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 10:18 am Post subject: |
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I'm going to change:
the left ear, the left paw, the tail.
thanks for the feedback guys.
this was my reference pic btw:
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paupav Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 10:53 am Post subject: |
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| gogodr wrote: | I'm going to change:
the left ear, the left paw, the tail.
thanks for the feedback guys.
this was my reference pic btw:
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 10:59 am Post subject: |
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I started with the shading and fixing some stuff
I might need to stop in about half an hour and start working tho x.x .. |
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Nirojan How do I cheat?
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 6:13 pm Post subject: |
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Dude eyes are still fucked, looks like a fuckin rabid coyote or some shit
you wanna borrow my cat? _________________
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 6:27 pm Post subject: |
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there, an update  |
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paupav Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 6:43 pm Post subject: |
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there, an update  |
idk, right ear is kinda too thick. |
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