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Boxes
How do I cheat?
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 Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 4:36 am Post subject: wrote a poem |
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| Quote: | I was lost but then I was found
Now that your around
I finally found the ground
I used to be in the sky with no known destination
But you made me realize I'm not alone
My love for you is without hesitation
You make me melt like butter
You are my one and only lover
You make my heart flutter
So take this key to my heart
Keep it close to yours
And we will never be apart |
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Idk I think its pretty suckish. | Quote: | I was lost but then I was found
Now that you're around
I've finally found the ground
I used to be in the sky with no known destination
But you made me realise I'm not alone
My love for you is without hesitation
You make me melt like butter
You make my heart flutter
You are my one and only lover
So take this key to my heart
Keep it close to yours
And we will never be apart
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M.
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| Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 5:45 am Post subject: |
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| >your around
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Zacky
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| Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:31 am Post subject: |
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you're around
| Quote: | I was lost but then I was found
Now that your around
I finally found the ground |
I've finally found the ground
But aside from the contractions, it's nice to see fresh poems in our age.
Keep up the good work. Let your creativity overcome you. 
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Fifty Shades of J
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| Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 9:52 am Post subject: |
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Boxes
How do I cheat?
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| Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:39 pm Post subject: |
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| Oh god I think I just murdered the english language
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Monkeys
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| Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:46 pm Post subject: |
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| Were you actively trying to write a poem?
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Boxes
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| Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:53 pm Post subject: |
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| Monkeys wrote: | | Were you actively trying to write a poem? |
Sort of.
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Monkeys
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| Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:27 pm Post subject: |
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Never just start with "I'm writing a poem now". It'll often suck.
You'll be stuck with those basic poetic standards in your head.
When I used to write them I always started off with a scene or wordplay in my head. Even if it was simple, I'd write snippets and they'd glue themselves together.
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