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Sharpies! Master Cheater
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:21 pm Post subject: SOTW 2 Entry - Sweeney Todd |
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So I haven't made a sig for awhile, and I really really felt like doing SOTW, but I have a camping trip tomorrow so I didn't really have time to think up a good way to match the theme better. :3
And yes, I know the effects and everything don't really match up with the theme all that well, besides the focal himself (anybody who's watched that movie knows it fits "violence" quite well.) I fooled around with a few splatter effects but they ended up just okay imo. ;-;
Anyways, comments/criticisms are most definitely encouraged, though I doubt I'll have time to make any changes for SOTW , as I'm getting back Sunday afternoon/night.
PS. We need more girls in this art section! D:
(they're more easily won over by shiny effects. >_>) _________________
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:26 pm Post subject: |
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hmmm, i think the flow is all wrong, the c4d's are going up when his face is pointing downward, just doesn't feel right _________________
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:32 pm Post subject: |
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| DUKE NUKEM wrote: | | hmmm, i think the flow is all wrong, the c4d's are going up when his face is pointing downward, just doesn't feel right |
His face is pointing downwards? |
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Stylised wrote: | | DUKE NUKEM wrote: | | hmmm, i think the flow is all wrong, the c4d's are going up when his face is pointing downward, just doesn't feel right |
His face is pointing downwards? | forward* _________________
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Stylised Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:52 pm Post subject: |
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| DUKE NUKEM wrote: | | Stylised wrote: | | DUKE NUKEM wrote: | | hmmm, i think the flow is all wrong, the c4d's are going up when his face is pointing downward, just doesn't feel right |
His face is pointing downwards? | forward* |
Oh I kind if see what point you're trying to make. Make the flashy lights go where is face is facing :< |
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C-Dizzle Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:55 am Post subject: |
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| I loved this movie and this sig is reasonably good. It just seems to be missing something, possibly flow. But still its really good. |
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trebor Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:09 am Post subject: |
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| Your focal isn't exactly supposed to go in the middle. ;-; |
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Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 10:20 am Post subject: |
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| So much contrast everywhere, not sure where to look but that seems to be your style. I think you should remove that bright orange dot at the bottom right. |
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