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Fantasy I post too much
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Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 8:32 am Post subject: My First Attempt.. Signature thingy? |
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Well, I got bored one night and thought I'd give it a go. Never really made
anything in Photoshop or programs alike, but I've messed around in it
sometimes. So here's the result.
Please be constructive, and point me in the right direction :]
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Womanizer Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:13 am Post subject: |
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Really nice.
Last edited by Womanizer on Sun Mar 07, 2010 9:54 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Fantasy I post too much
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 9:36 am Post subject: |
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Thank you.
But I'd like some advise to take it to a new level ^^
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Womanizer Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 9:55 am Post subject: |
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Its perfect. Nothing need to be done more.
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Moments Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:46 am Post subject: |
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Womanizer wrote: | Its perfect. Nothing need to be done more. | Are you fucking retarded? Get out of the Art section; we don't need people here for post count. If you're going to post, post some real shit. You're just a waste of space.
This is far from perfect;
What I'd work on most is the contrast. Some of it's too bright and somewhat distracts me from the (large) focal. Then, some parts are too dark.
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C-Dizzle Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:34 pm Post subject: |
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It is really good but the bright white on the right draws my full attention meaning i dont really notice the rest of the picture unless i really look.
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Fantasy I post too much
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 1:51 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah okay, I see :]
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trebor Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:01 pm Post subject: |
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Look at some PS tuts on dA.
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Fantasy I post too much
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 3:34 am Post subject: |
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Ah, nice. Thanks, didn't know they had tutorials there ^^
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:52 pm Post subject: |
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You need to make it blend more
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