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Snow1337 Catastrophic Cheatah
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Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 2:22 am Post subject: Centrix Release (Signature) |
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Possitive or Negative feedback, if you think I should have done something differently then tell me and I will see what I think _________________
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 2:33 am Post subject: |
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looks pretty decent
there is a suggestion though
I think it would look better if you make the opacity gradient for the dots to fade a little faster so it completely fades on the middle
also bring the cube on top of the dots.
also for the text, I would recommend you to lower it so it is like aligned with the low right corner.
and a last suggestion is to remake the border since the white on it makes it look a little out of place.
if you want some rating I would give it a 7.5/10
what I really do like is how you drew that shapes with the pen tool and fill I suppose, they have a very good flow. |
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Snow1337 Catastrophic Cheatah
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Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:15 am Post subject: |
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I liked the adjustment ideas so I went ahead and re-edited it.. I didn't blend the dots in to much more in the middle because I liked the 70% fade effect.
Put the box is in front of the dots now, and I put a black outer glow around the text because when I moved it down there you couldn't read it as well.
Thanks, I love the pen tool _________________
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:26 am Post subject: |
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hmm instead of a black outer glow why dont you try it with a soft shadow with a short distance, I think it may look a little better also not it looks a little cramped, I would suggest you to move the cube a little more to the left.
its looking good. |
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Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:31 am Post subject: |
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Made up some room and did a light shadow instead of outer glow and i like it more that way _________________
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:37 am Post subject: |
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looking better.
nice work
I would give you some more suggestions there but I really don't want to get much into it, sorry, sometimes I just get carried away xP
its your work after all, not mine n.n;;
now I would change my rating from the 7.5/10 to an 8.5/10 it still lacks something but is as much as I can say, just a feeling. |
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Snow1337 Catastrophic Cheatah
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Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:39 am Post subject: |
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Thats what I was saying.. it lacked something, It does have a version... LOL.. I can upgrade it when I spring with ideas, but thanks for the feedback and suggestions.
*Edit*
I was thinking some tech arrows would be a cool touch up, but I will brainstorm tomorrow or something.. I am going to bed
Hmm.. I been brainstorming and thought of some good changes and can't believe I had no other comments _________________
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