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Kronos Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 8:45 am Post subject: Bug |
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cnc appreciated
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 8:49 am Post subject: |
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Too messy and text doesn't fit.
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Kronos Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 9:03 am Post subject: |
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Its not messy... what do you want me to do? to only put an blank stock and just put an border and post it? so it wont be messy?
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To0k How do I cheat?
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 9:15 am Post subject: |
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| Clairenix wrote: | | Too messy and text doesn't fit. | True, it is messy. Also, Kronos is bad at text.
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Xyxi Cheater
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 9:42 am Post subject: |
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You know what, im going to say this is a great piece.
Considering all i see in everyone one of your posts is criticism.
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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| Kronos wrote: | | Its not messy... what do you want me to do? to only put an blank stock and just put an border and post it? so it wont be messy? | Don't fucking chat back when someone gives you advice. Fuck.
It's messy, sucks to be you if the only way you can achieve a non-messy piece is by not doing anything.
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HackOtaku I posted the 500000th topic
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 9:49 am Post subject: |
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| There's too much going on, and the render just sort of looks slapped on there, doesn't look like you tried to make it seem like it was naturally part of the image. Also, as said before, the text isn't the best. I don't like how "bug" is in cursive, either.
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Solomon Grundy Cheater
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| Like above, too much going on and it seems as though all of your art is the same thing over and over again.
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 2:31 pm Post subject: |
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You should have made the C4D's all come from the bottom-right, and maybe used a color overlay to make them blend more, such as a green or yellow.
This is actually a piece that deserves criticism. Good luck man.
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ButtTroll Newbie cheater
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Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 1:16 am Post subject: |
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i think the unchanged render really brings out the focal point of the piece...
but it is a bit messy
7/10
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