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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:33 pm Post subject: Pippi Chan (WIP) |
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Work in progress::
to do:
Scrap (check)
clean stroke and vectorization (check)
Color ()
final touches ()
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Dina :3 Cheater
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:54 pm Post subject: |
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The breasts seem to be odd in shape. They seem elliptical instead of circular. One eyebrow is thicker than the other, though that may have been done for dramatic effect. Otherwise, no major flaws. Good work.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:59 pm Post subject: |
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I Shall Fix breast later then xP since its still the sketch and didn't start vectorizing yet
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:00 am Post subject: |
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I look forward to seeing the end result :3.
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i think the breasts are alittle too big for her the rest of her body she should be alittle more... perky.
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gogodr I post too much
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spame Girl wrote: | i think the breasts are alittle too big for her the rest of her body she should be alittle more... perky. |
I want to make her flat chest but I just dont know how to draw that >.>...... .
V2 posted, hopefully is better XP
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They're better, but still a little out of place in size, mainly the outside of it. Picture her nude, if it makes you feel any better, and see if it would make sense for her breasts to be that large.
Edit: They also need to be a bit higher.
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gogodr I post too much
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I'm using refferences of other animes and all I find is larger and larger breasts >.>.....
but I think I get it, also shape is a little wrong.. I'll see what can I do..
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gogodr wrote: | I'm using refferences of other animes and all I find is larger and larger breasts >.>.....
but I think I get it, also shape is a little wrong.. I'll see what can I do.. | Try "Lucky Star", they're more of the "moe" type of anime, which I'm reminded of when I view her face.
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Much better :3 Well done!
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Dina :3 wrote: | gogodr wrote: | I'm using refferences of other animes and all I find is larger and larger breasts >.>.....
but I think I get it, also shape is a little wrong.. I'll see what can I do.. | Try "Lucky Star", they're more of the "moe" type of anime, which I'm reminded of when I view her face. |
if you really want a reference for flat chested girls i would also recommend lucky star. but its more chibi than anything. for your kinda drawing if yu want a flat chest reference look for Rena from .hack//
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gogodr I post too much
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Dina :3 wrote: | Much better :3 Well done! |
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I got my refference from konomo no jikan though >.>.... I just remembered that I had an OVA of that anime in my disk and though it may help so it did it n.n
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Why do you want her to have a flat chest? That's odd. ._."
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you could maybe study from my deviant. most my girls have small breasts. it sorta bugs me how women in anime have to have breasts down to their waist.
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Why do you want her to have a flat chest? That's odd. ._." |
may sound les for me but flat chested girls are cute with the right body.
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