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redslothx
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so i'm like about to finish something but i'm having trouble with the ending.
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i'm thinking about killing the main character's lover and creating a big dramatic ending.
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let her live an kill her later on in the second war that will end the series in the next book.
(it's a serious sci-fi book. No childish crap ._.)
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snape kills dumbledore.
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| Put in a Terrorist kidnapping the lover and demanding the death of America
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| Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:03 am Post subject: |
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| Trucido wrote: | | snape kills dumbledore. |
Dumbledore is gay.
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redslothx
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| Zohan wrote: | | Put in a Terrorist kidnapping the lover and demanding the death of America |
too late for that.
already at the end of the book and gf is urging me to make a good ending.
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| redslothx wrote: | | Zohan wrote: | | Put in a Terrorist kidnapping the lover and demanding the death of America |
too late for that.
already at the end of the book and gf is urging me to make a good ending. |
Put it as the beginning of the second book
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| Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:06 am Post subject: |
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| You could make her appear to die, like be kidnapped by a group of whatever baddies you have in the book, then presume her dead until the next book.
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| Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:08 am Post subject: |
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You should have: sex then dead.
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redslothx
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| Cryoma wrote: | | You could make her appear to die, like be kidnapped by a group of whatever baddies you have in the book, then presume her dead until the next book. |
not possible 0.0
the guy who wants to kill her is sending his people already.
the main character and her control their own people to fight back.
what i'm thinking of doing is that the other guy tricks the main character by making it look like he died in battle. When his ship falls from orbit after it's blown up, he escapes in a smaller ship towards where the main character's gf is. The two start fighting, main character notices the trap and heads back to her.
just as he arrives, the other guy kills her. main character gets into a rage and slaughters him in some fepic fight =0
(like i said, it's sci-fi styled. but in a good way, no cheesy alien crap >_>)
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| Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:14 am Post subject: |
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| end it with The End. thats how endings work
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redslothx
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nuuuu
there's some personal things in there that i don't want others to see cuz it's personal ._.
besides, it's long.
i need to finish it soon and you won't read the whole thing cuz it's so long.
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no's no. god >_>
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no amount of Rep in the universe would get me to show this to you =0
only GF and a my old english teacher from HS will see it cuz it was their idea that i wrote a serious book <3
it's really personal stuff that would just reaveal too much about me.
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| ASNES wrote: | | But like I said, I don't know you so I wouldn't know what would be personal. |
Are you retarded? Personal stuff shows people who you are, thus if he showed you his book with personal things about it him, you would know him personally which generally people do not want people from the internet to know
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redslothx
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| Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:44 am Post subject: |
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| Brolock wrote: | | ASNES wrote: | | But like I said, I don't know you so I wouldn't know what would be personal. |
Are you retarded? Personal stuff shows people who you are, thus if he showed you his book with personal things about it him, you would know him personally which generally people do not want people from the internet to know |
yes <3
my real personality shall remain a secret.
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