Cheat Engine

Mobsy · Last edited by Mobsy on Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:11 am; edited 3 times in total

v1:

v2:

v2 without text:

v3:

Rating /10 + Opinions, please.
Thanks.

sponge cake recipe · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:17 am Post subject:

It's pertty nice for a first, here's a few tips though.
Try to vary your colours. It's all very blue :3
The black line across the middle could be removed completely, along with that weird white one going vertically.
Text is pretty standard, try a new font but I'd leave it out alltogether.
Maybe add a cinematic border (thick(ish) black lines on top and bottom).
For your first I'll give you a 8/10, great effort.

Kronos · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:20 am Post subject:

Looks good.
I dont like the black line. also the text distracts me from the focal. put the text near therender. i will probably put it on the gun. needs a border. maybe a cinematic one.

Mobsy · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:31 am Post subject:

Thanks ^^

Having read the suggestions opens up a whole load of improvements I wouldn't have though of in a million years, and the (very) generuos rating is encouraging.

I may apply the tips into a newer version of this or in a completely new siggy altogether (I just can't stop making them now... Once you start, you can't finish).

Anyway, thanks a lot.

Kronos · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:34 am Post subject:

Lol ausfag beat me to it.

EliasAndri · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:36 am Post subject:

If you absolutely want to keep the line, should try to make it thinner.
I think the white is kind of extreme white.. I don't know just something about it that bugs me.
It's a little blue, or maybe it's just me Cool

The background seems to be is a bad resolution compared to the render :/
But it looks great, I love the render!
Maybe a 7-8/10.

Note: All my critique is invalid for my knowledge on this subject is below average, just stating my opinions for fun Smile

Mobsy · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:52 am Post subject:

Kronos · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:00 am Post subject:

It looks good but i would go to the v3. in v2 the text doesnt look that good. .

I would put it liket this:

Blur the bg a bit, i guess.

Mobsy · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:02 am Post subject:

Ooh! Me likes. I will test around..

EliasAndri · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:37 am Post subject:

Yeah I like v3, you should try play around with the text in free transformation and try making it more like the text is actually on the gun Smile

Mobsy · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:35 am Post subject:

Finality's End · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:55 pm Post subject:

The text looks a little out of place on the gun but I guess that distorting it would make it unreadable, do you think that the top right would work, to balance it out...?

Mobsy · Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 1:58 pm Post subject:

Phixen · Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:53 pm Post subject:

I would really just leave the text. It doesn't suit the render at all. Original stock and render, please? Quite monotone but you've done better than those who made their ever 1st proper signatures. What's with the sudden dark corner on the bottom right?