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Farr. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 3:29 pm Post subject: My first sig |
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Hey guys,
So recently I've been a bit bored and decided to try to make a signature. This is my very first signature I ever made so please tell me what you like and dislike about it. I need good critisism so I can get better.
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Honda Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 3:36 pm Post subject: |
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ehh, it's alright
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NooksCranny Master Cheater
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 3:42 pm Post subject: |
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well i feel like BioShock the word is repetitive in this Sig. You only need BioShock once. Also the lighting is done poorly. Sure you did lighty to the BioShock on the left, but the light should flow throughout the sig including the render. Also a black background? that just looks horrible. Much detail is needed. The glow around the render looks back with the background, and blending is needed between the render and background.
So i suggest the get a stock, use it as a background. Blend the Render to the stock (many ways F.E. transparent effect or smudging), and get rid of glow on render.. Only use one Bioshock. Add some brushes for effects to your Stock. Make the light more effective, and use the lighting on the whole piece not use the background. And if you really want to make it look good add some C4Ds for great effect or gradient to blend colors.
Goodluck and excluding everything i said, the sig is good for your first.
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Farr. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 3:46 pm Post subject: |
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| yea, it wasn't originally a black background I just darkened it =/ and I used weird lighting because I kind of wanted the bioshock logo to look like it was engraved into the stone. The original background was actually very bright I just thought this would make it look better.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 4:04 pm Post subject: |
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| change the color of the glow to black and it will look way better
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redslothx Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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dark brown background + blue render = bad
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