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Flayre Expert Cheater
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 9:29 pm Post subject: Constructive Criticism; First Signature |
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OH NOEZ!
-Digitil_Soul
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Honda Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 9:31 pm Post subject: |
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I thought you were a good sig maker...
it's alright 4/10
It's too plain, imo |
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MiguelKN2 Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 9:34 pm Post subject: |
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Well a lil plain but looks pretty good code geass sig xP _________________
But hey that's just my opinion |
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Jeff Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 9:41 pm Post subject: |
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| too big. |
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Phixen I post too much
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 10:22 pm Post subject: |
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Border's a little too big don't ya think?
*Cough*Lelouch's expression looks...weird. |
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 11:04 pm Post subject: |
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Way, way too big.
Pretty damn good for a first sig though. |
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The evil elf. Expert Cheater
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 11:54 pm Post subject: |
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the border is a little big and so is the sig but i like it and it is great for a first sig  |
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ControlAltDelete Friendly Giant
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 5:14 am Post subject: |
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The weird "F" Takes my focus of the focal. ;\ _________________
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NINTENDO Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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| ControlAltDelete wrote: | | The weird "F" Takes my focus of the focal. ;\ |
ye it doesn't even look like a f. At first I didn't see it was meant to be a f. _________________
Intel over amd yes. |
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[SS] Siren Expert Cheater
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 8:23 am Post subject: |
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If it was you're first sig then its not that bad, but I agree Phixen the border is to big, and resize it so its thinner but keep the length the same. _________________
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NooksCranny Master Cheater
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 11:28 am Post subject: |
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Well look who makes their first sig. You don't even have the qualifications to critique my sigs. Please don't try because most of you comments were outspoken, and not very helpful. I love how i ask to you what i could change, and you simply didn't respond.
Other than that this sig is alright. The text is horid. the blending is pretty good. i don't like those brushes coming out from the light source because they look badly placed. Good for first. |
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 12:43 pm Post subject: |
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Here I go: I hope it helps
1) bad choice of colors, that render looks more to blend with a white blue instead of green, even though it looks you were focusing on the girl's hair and picked green, the principal character in your render is the the guy not the girl.
2) that blur effect you have there is ok but not well placed, try to not cover your principal render with blur, save the effect just for the background,
3) size is 504px × 216px , I would recommend you to work with 500 px x 150px
4)looks kinda empty why don't you try adding some brushes or drawing something to complement the background around the render?
5) that "f" is barely an "F" and the difference with the other letters is quite ridiculous, when doing that effect just try making it all 1 only text layer and just change the size of the first letter xP and be sure to pick a nice font.
6) border is too thick , you should make it a little thinner or make some details on it. for example, some times I like making a solid bicolored((2 colors )) border, like... black and gray, or you can give some shapes to that border.
well for being your first try .. I should say, its ok, even though if I remember good its better than my first try I guess, all you need is practice
here here I found my first sigs
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zyndr0m I post too much
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 2:14 pm Post subject: |
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Flayre Expert Cheater
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 7:02 pm Post subject: |
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Just an FYI, the person who posted this picture is digitil_soul. I, on the other hand, am c4rdm4st3r. We are not the same person even if we do use the same account. And let me assure you, my skill in digital art far surpasses his. Not bragging, just informing.
I guess I'll just have to start signing of my posts,
-CM
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| RedCard wrote: | | Well look who makes their first sig. You don't even have the qualifications to critique my sigs. Please don't try because most of you comments were outspoken, and not very helpful. I love how i ask to you what i could change, and you simply didn't respond. |
You know what I think? I think you're an ignorant little fool who makes assumptions and guesses without ever analyzing the bigger picture. And you should also try to learn how and when to use sarcasm effectively.
If by bolding "makes", you are trying to imply that I rip or leech my sigs then why don't you go ahead and show some evidence of that denunciation.
If I didn't have the qualifications to critique your sigs, I wouldn't. But I do which means that I do possess the capability to critique and excoriate your work. And if my comments were so pathetically "outspoken" and "not very helpful" then why do they affect you the way they are affecting you right now? Why did my comments hold so much importance for you that you took it out of your time to ask me about what you could change?
I'm sorry that I do not think it important to go back to every thread that I have previously posted in to check for replies and answers like a fervent dog.
I don't give any shit in the world what you love or don't love.
But alas, I must take some of the blame for it was not common knowledge that this account was shared between me and digitil_soul. |
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[SS] Siren Expert Cheater
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 7:29 am Post subject: |
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Well this was my first sig. Rubbish I know, but everybody starts off rubbish, I think;
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Deleted the image. _________________
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