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Prince charming How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:28 am Post subject: Whoever wants to read my experience on sleep paralysis, |
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and night terrors..
http://www.abovetopsecret.com/forum/thread300377/pg1
Scary shit, yo'
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Prince charming How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:29 am Post subject: |
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Different links, you twat.
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Pedo Bear Expert Cheater
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:35 am Post subject: |
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| i will read it
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Prince charming How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:36 am Post subject: |
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Excellent.
This is an actual true story.
That shit happened to me.
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:38 am Post subject: |
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"I feel asleep each day for a week or so with no other problems, except my dreams."
I'm no writer but I think you made a typo there x:
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Blank I post too much
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:40 am Post subject: |
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I can imagine having shit like that as a child that age.
I read all of it. Good read. Personally, shit is scary.
I thought I was wigging out when I had my Acute Dystonic Reaction, but this shit is just 'wtf'.
*Fixed a typo.
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Prince charming How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:41 am Post subject: |
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| PANIC ATTACK wrote: | "I feel asleep each day for a week or so with no other problems, except my dreams."
I'm no writer but I think you made a typo there x: |
This was before I got good at writing.
I'm allowed to make a few mistakes here and there.
THE POINT IS THIS SHIT WAS REAL AND HAPPENED TO ME.
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| I doubt you got scars from those nightmares
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Prince charming How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:44 am Post subject: |
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Want me to take pictures?
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:45 am Post subject: |
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Sure but I still won't believe they are from nightmares
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Prince charming How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:46 am Post subject: |
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Then I'm not going to take pictures.
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:50 am Post subject: |
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Story, use less brackets and more sub-clauses or series of short sentences. Was more blog like, unless that is what you intended.
And make the story more eventful !
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Prince charming How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:51 am Post subject: |
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| Slugsnack wrote: | Story, use less brackets and more sub-clauses or series of short sentences. Was more blog like, unless that is what you intended.
And make the story more eventful ! |
Was not meant to be a fiction piece. I said that above.
That shit happened to me.
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 3:56 am Post subject: |
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| Didn't say it was. Just gave tips to make it better (imo).
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