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Selrahc
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I cant figure out the hands, how to place them on her head. If you spot anything else wrong tell me and Ill try to fix it.
Im not done by a long shot, this is just the sketch.
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Looks cool. She has black women lips though.
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Looks pretty good for a sketch to start with. Only thing that looks off is the other arm behind the front one. Just doesn't have enough detail to see it well, but as you said this is a sketch. Shadows will probably help that when you get to that point.
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Selrahc
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| Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 8:17 pm Post subject: |
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No suggestions on the hand? Its pretty terrible, I still cant fix it.
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| Brosiris wrote: | | No suggestions on the hand? Its pretty terrible, I still cant fix it. |
It looks good clenching their hair like it is. Doesn't look bad.
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hand is not bad.
shoulder/arm is not in place
nose needs a lift up right now it is kind of like voldemord's nose
also there are some lines that I'm not sure why they are there even when considering it being a sketch
overal work is quite decent, I like where this is going
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| Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 11:24 pm Post subject: |
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Meh, gave the wrist/hand a quick edit.
F5.
I can't be assed to fix it entirely. Basically you just had her wrist too beafy and thumb way too far back. From here you could also try raising the knuckles a bit. And remember, middle knuckle stands the tallest and goes the furthest forward.
Also the lines on top of the knuckles... what's that? I assumed just reference points so I left them.
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Selrahc
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| Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 12:02 am Post subject: |
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Progress so far...
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when i saw her hands on head...i truly lol'd 
it looks like someone just cut off her fingers.
hers wrists are too thin,or its just hands too big ? 
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| Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 12:03 pm Post subject: |
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Use photos for reference before you start drawing from memory, unless picaso.
Her nose is too low and god everything else is beyond words.
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| Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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Um... get rid of every one of those fingers on top...
And what the fuck her thumb. Everything looked so much better before you colored it.
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| Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 5:27 pm Post subject: |
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Ew blue shirt with red background...change that
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| Brosiris wrote: | Progress so far...
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Now that you color it, you can see her disembodied fingers, and her trans racial face. Not trying to be racist here, or anything, but some parts of her face look white and others black. IMO you should have just left it in the grey color, it looked nice.
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Selrahc
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| Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 8:14 pm Post subject: |
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Fucking hand
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| Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2011 8:32 pm Post subject: |
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Fixed the arm, hand, nose and ear.
And by fixed I mean I generally moved it in the right direction.
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