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makeusore
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InternetIsSeriousBusiness
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What the heck is it? I am clueless.
Also, I have fixed your grammar errors in your post, if you want to edit it.
| Quote: | So, here I am.
Here is Shariq Shah lying bare, naked, right in front of you.
This is me, all summed up on a neat, tidy little wall.
These are my loves, my wants, my likes, my dislikes, my hates, my idiosyncrasies, my habits, my rants, my evil alter ego... basically everything about me.
I don't need to tell you that I tend to spaz, rant, laugh, live, learn, eat, laugh, rage, game, laugh, talk obnoxiously loud, attention whore, laugh, hurt and end up laughing, and oh... did I mention laugh?, because that's what these posts are for.
But I guess I just did, didn't I?
Well here I am, Shariq, Shark, Shrek, Shahahaha, Shah-ho, Whor-se, Big Brother, Little Brother, Best Brother, that hopeless romantic, that nice guy who finished last, that funny guy, that lame kid, the best friend.
I'm a SENIOR at MSJHS in Fremont, CA.
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NooksCranny
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| Assuming i has a abstract/realism theme i like it. However i feel the lack of a focal and poor lighting distracts from the picture. And the text is not needed, and most of the time isn't need. If you are going to use text, look up typography, and make it have meaning.
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atom0s
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Looks like a hook holding a plant pot. Is the 'spark' effect rain or is that a filter cause honestly that kinda doesn't really fit if its not water. (Or that you just really over killed it with after effects.) Other then that not a bad picture.
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Culver78
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| Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 1:17 am Post subject: |
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| It is not a bad pic. I am interesting in photographing too.
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| Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 6:03 pm Post subject: |
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| Culver78 wrote: | | I am interesting in photographing |
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makeusore
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| Posted: Mon May 23, 2011 10:22 pm Post subject: |
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I'm looking for ways to improve this photograph and my many others...
any suggestions?
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| Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 12:00 am Post subject: |
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| Too colorful.
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Phox
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| The text in the corner seriously ruins the picture. I shit you not, it would be so much better without that shitty text, and truth be told, the actual art is not bad. Poem is bullshit, sorry. Every single high school girl I know writes one of those under every single one of their profile pictures.
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C-Dizzle
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Nice picture. I actually like the lighting.
Still, pretentious as fuck.
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Up2Admin
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| Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 10:52 pm Post subject: |
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| Phox wrote: | | The text in the corner seriously ruins the picture. I shit you not, it would be so much better without that shitty text, and truth be told, the actual art is not bad. Poem is bullshit, sorry. Every single high school girl I know writes one of those under every single one of their profile pictures. |
I'm pretty sure that text is his signature. A lot of professional photographers do that.
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