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Ze[X]ro Master Cheater
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M.CORP Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2011 6:45 pm Post subject: |
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The hat is too dark, it looks like she's wearing an upside down pants.
Another one is that the 'hat''s color doesn't match with the main character.
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InternetIsSeriousBusiness Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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I have to agree with marvin about the hat.
I like the text however.
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Radiation Grandmaster Cheater
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+=Marvin=+ wrote: | The hat is too dark, it looks like she's wearing an upside down pants.
Another one is that the 'hat''s color doesn't match with the main character. |
pants or high heel shoes
i can't read the bottom line of the text
nice motion blur effects and
also, your flying fragments should either be all dots/splats or all "triangular"
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 2:56 pm Post subject: |
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Make the canvas smaller and make it more compact. Right now, your elements are scattered everywhere with huge spaces in between each other. When a piece is close together, they will look like a whole, which will over all look best; most of the time.
If you can't make it any smaller, then don't use that render if you can't add anymore content that actually make sense with each other because right now, it's just render+text+fliter background slapped on together.
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Phox I post too much
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 3:24 pm Post subject: |
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Your splatter brushing is too diffused and dilute. When you use brushes, you need it to have shape and flow. Example: The tag above is too bland and scattered. It attempts to have shape, but it's just kind of boring. That vs the tag below, which has good flow and substance.
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Ze[X]ro Master Cheater
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Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 5:49 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for the Replies :3
I'll make it bettah next time
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hackerdvm Master Cheater
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Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:45 am Post subject: |
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Take a brush and make the opacity to 48.8 and should not look to hard looking on the hat.
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MikeyREDD Cheater
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 11:56 pm Post subject: |
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Cute
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