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		Microsoft Grandmaster Cheater
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		gogodr I post too much
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				 Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:50 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				please upload to:
 
soundcloud
 
goear
 
or newgrounds
 
 
so we can listen online and give crits without having to download it.
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		Microsoft Grandmaster Cheater
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:37 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				Newgrounds link added
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		gogodr I post too much
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:04 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				| the tempo is all messed up x-x
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:33 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				hell no, I matched it up with a metronome, i think the kick just distorts everything though
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		InternetIsSeriousBusiness Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:14 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				It's good, but not great.
 
 
There is a period like between 1:02-1:05 I didn't like.
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		gogodr I post too much
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:36 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				 	  | Microsoft wrote: | 	 		  | hell no, I matched it up with a metronome, i think the kick just distorts everything though | 	  
 
I have been in music for over 10 years and I can tell you. the tempo is all messed up.
 
 
I don't mean the main tempo but the performance is not following it.
 
all the performance is all awkward and off tempo(not in the good way).
 
 
 
Here is one I made with a "similar" feeling to it. 
 
you can hear how it matches in tempo perfectly which is what you need to do.
 
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/254555
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		Cryoma Member of the Year
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:37 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				The tempo IS messed up, you just added pauses between bars on the faster tracks so they lined up with the slower ones.
 
I don't know if you did that on purpose or what, but it sounds terribly wacky.
 
What software are you using?
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				 Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:21 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				 	  | Cryoma wrote: | 	 		  The tempo IS messed up, you just added pauses between bars on the faster tracks so they lined up with the slower ones.
 
I don't know if you did that on purpose or what, but it sounds terribly wacky.
 
What software are you using? | 	  
 
 
Cubase 5. Also, I got rid of that sound in general, turns out it has delay sound every time a key is pressed. I just replaced it with a more trancey sound, I'll upload a newer version once I'm somewhat content with it.
 
 
Edit: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/390694 
 
 
heres the revision. 
 
 
There are a couple solos toward the end
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		Exodus_ How do I cheat?
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				 Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 5:07 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				Have you considered creating Experimental, IDM, Glitch and/or Drum N' Bass???
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