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C-Dizzle
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 Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 12:37 pm Post subject: Personal statement. |
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| I need to write a 4000 word piece about me, the course I am interested in and my hobbies. Do you think it is a good idea putting in that I like gaming? All I have at the moment is music and that I know a bit about web development.
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C-Dizzle
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| Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 12:44 pm Post subject: Re: Personal statement. |
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| Haxory' wrote: | | Dialgar wrote: | | I need to write a 4000 word piece about me, the course I am interested in and my hobbies. Do you think it is a good idea putting in that I like gaming? All I have at the moment is music and that I know a bit about web development. |
Put in that you learn a lot of shit online and are able to adapt and accept others opinions. |
Cool, that actually fits in with something ^-^
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| Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 12:49 pm Post subject: Re: Personal statement. |
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| Dialgar wrote: | | Haxory' wrote: | | Dialgar wrote: | | I need to write a 4000 word piece about me, the course I am interested in and my hobbies. Do you think it is a good idea putting in that I like gaming? All I have at the moment is music and that I know a bit about web development. |
Put in that you learn a lot of shit online and are able to adapt and accept others opinions. |
Cool, that actually fits in with something ^-^ |
write an overly long code that end up simply saying "i am [whatever ur name is]
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C-Dizzle
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| Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 12:58 pm Post subject: Re: Personal statement. |
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| Degtyarev wrote: | | Dialgar wrote: | | Haxory' wrote: | | Dialgar wrote: | | I need to write a 4000 word piece about me, the course I am interested in and my hobbies. Do you think it is a good idea putting in that I like gaming? All I have at the moment is music and that I know a bit about web development. |
Put in that you learn a lot of shit online and are able to adapt and accept others opinions. |
Cool, that actually fits in with something ^-^ |
write an overly long code that end up simply saying "i am [whatever ur name is] |
Doesn't really work on a uni applications, you know, what with it being on paper and what not....
Man my life seems kind of sucky when you write it down on paper - Games, music, science.
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| Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 2:27 pm Post subject: |
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| Since I've seen your posts and you don't seem like a total retard I am offering my help to critique your statement which I assume is for UCAS. I'm just being nice and I happen to be good at doing those. Get in touch if you want my help.
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C-Dizzle
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| Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 2:29 pm Post subject: |
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| Slugsnack wrote: | | Since I've seen your posts and you don't seem like a total retard I am offering my help to critique your statement which I assume is for UCAS. I'm just being nice and I happen to be good at doing those. Get in touch if you want my help. |
Yeah, it's UCAS. This is just my very first draft and I am giving it to my form tutor tomorrow for her to read over it. Thanks for the offer anyways  I have a lot of time to do it anyway as I am staying in college for a third year to finish off my physics and take double maths. So I should end up leaving with 4 A-levels.
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Slugsnack
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| Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 2:35 pm Post subject: |
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| Don't rely on your tutor to be of any real help to you. Mostly they will give you completely obvious tips or correct spelling, etc. Tutors are there for the majority/average of the class. If you are aiming higher than that you will need to put more work in. That's where I can help. Anyway if you want you can PM me your current work and I can critique it for you.
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C-Dizzle
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| Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 3:18 pm Post subject: |
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| Slugsnack wrote: | | Don't rely on your tutor to be of any real help to you. Mostly they will give you completely obvious tips or correct spelling, etc. Tutors are there for the majority/average of the class. If you are aiming higher than that you will need to put more work in. That's where I can help. Anyway if you want you can PM me your current work and I can critique it for you. |
I'm alright for now but I may ask for your help in a few months if that is ok. and thanks again.
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