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Strathe Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 3:50 pm Post subject: C&C My SOTW Entry |
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Hello guys, i wanted your opinion on this, which i made for the violence theme from this week's 'Sig Of The Week'.
I wondered for a while what else i could add on the left but i couldn't find anything.
I had to render the girl and cut her hair a bit xD
Didn't really do much because the white fits well there.. what do you think?
Edit : Just wanted to add that, i had started about one year ago in photoshop but then like after a few days, due to computer performances lacking i had to give up on photoshop (took too long to do a single action).
I now got a brand new computer thus why i'm trying again.
So please give advices to help me improve !
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Rawrtard Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:07 pm Post subject: |
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isn't SOTW over?
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Fantasy I post too much
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 3:53 am Post subject: |
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It's alot easier for us to help if you post the render of the girl and everything you used, so we can see what you've done? (:
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Stylised Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:25 am Post subject: |
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Fantasy wrote: | It's alot easier for us to help if you post the render of the girl and everything you used, so we can see what you've done? (: |
He put the blood splatter thing on the background and added a border.
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Strathe Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 4:52 am Post subject: |
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That's the image i used.
And what i'm asking is what i should've added on the left cause, i personally think the blank fits there but i don't know if anything could have.
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 5:37 am Post subject: |
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Would've been far more impressive if you added the blood on her face yourself.
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Farr. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:43 pm Post subject: |
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So basically,
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:46 pm Post subject: |
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So...like how hard was it? splatter brush, damn son mad skills.
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 1:46 pm Post subject: |
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Very bad. It is boring, dull, lazy, the wallpaper is what?, bad render (nothing going on) and no focal point.
You should add many more effects on the background, and make sure the focal point is right.
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