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Trance Break Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 9:40 pm Post subject: Smudge Attempt..? :( |
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c&c please.
...psing is fun.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:10 pm Post subject: |
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Uh...way too blank, after your done smudging you should add more
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Rawrtard Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:23 am Post subject: |
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I personally think it has to much space and shouldn't be centered...
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Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 2:29 am Post subject: |
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1) The whites don't fit in.
2) Plain.
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C-Dizzle Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 10:42 am Post subject: |
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I like it. Personally I don't think there is too much white.
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Trance Break Master Cheater
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Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 4:14 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the critique, guys
after smudging and stuff, what do you people think I can add to it?
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C-Dizzle Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 4:16 pm Post subject: |
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Background Disney characters? Keyblades?
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Womanizer Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 2:58 am Post subject: |
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well you should add a background it shouldn't be white, but its awesome.
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Trance Break Master Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 8:36 am Post subject: |
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does that look any better?
btw thanks alot for the suggestions, means alot to me
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 8:48 am Post subject: |
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does that look any better?
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It looks better, theirs still a little white at the top, at least make it darker, like light gray.
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 8:55 am Post subject: |
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Imo the one in your signature right now looks good but the text in it is bad. Combine the one in your signature with the text from your other one and it will be nice.
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trebor Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:35 am Post subject: |
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Now to make it better you made a background, but you fucked up the focal.
Take out Sora's dup.
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