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Vincent. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:02 am Post subject: Bored, just want some comments |
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which i can use to get better.
And a WIP,
No comments like: They suck etc because i already know that, just tell me how to improve.
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:04 am Post subject: |
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| Some antialiasing for starters, dayum.
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Vincent. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:06 am Post subject: |
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| Spanito wrote: | | Some antialiasing for starters, dayum. |
Actually I did that on purpose.
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:12 am Post subject: |
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| Clean up those nasty edges, man.
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Vincent. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:17 am Post subject: |
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| anything else then the pixelated lines..?
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 11:03 am Post subject: |
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| I know it's graffiti, but try to make the letters seem more self founded. By that I mean I think they should look like their own letter, rather than be a blog with lines on it making it look like they're that letter. Get what I mean? Like make them connect smoothly, but still look like that's what they're doing, connecting, not just being a part of that big blob.
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Vincent. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 11:21 am Post subject: |
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| konr wrote: | | I know it's graffiti, but try to make the letters seem more self founded. By that I mean I think they should look like their own letter, rather than be a blog with lines on it making it look like they're that letter. Get what I mean? Like make them connect smoothly, but still look like that's what they're doing, connecting, not just being a part of that big blob. |
Yes I understand, but I dislike overlapping letters, sample:
I always did that kind of connecting, just overlapping, but I got tired of it..
But thanks I'll keep your comment in mind .
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 12:04 pm Post subject: |
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| Roy. wrote: | | konr wrote: | | I know it's graffiti, but try to make the letters seem more self founded. By that I mean I think they should look like their own letter, rather than be a blog with lines on it making it look like they're that letter. Get what I mean? Like make them connect smoothly, but still look like that's what they're doing, connecting, not just being a part of that big blob. |
Yes I understand, but I dislike overlapping letters, sample:
I always did that kind of connecting, just overlapping, but I got tired of it..
But thanks I'll keep your comment in mind . | In your example they don't connect, as such, and I think it would be better if they did, but only by one part, like the bottom of the T connects to the E, etc/. So rather than just overlapping, do both.
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 2:08 pm Post subject: |
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looks more like bubble letters than graffiti
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Vincent. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:07 pm Post subject: |
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| I never said it were graffiti letters, and bubble letters could be graffiti too.
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