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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 9:08 pm Post subject: -;Halo Reach |
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Made it for Muzic and liked the outcome.
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 9:47 pm Post subject: |
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Not understanding the focal... why is my attention being focused to the knife instead of... him.
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 10:55 pm Post subject: |
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the interwebz wrote: | Not understanding the focal... why is my attention being focused to the knife instead of... him. |
You realize that I intended the knife to be the focal?
holy fuck
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Moments Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 12:08 am Post subject: |
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Queenston wrote: | the interwebz wrote: | Not understanding the focal... why is my attention being focused to the knife instead of... him. |
You realize that I intended the knife to be the focal?
holy fuck | HERPDERP, LETS PUT A GIANT LIGHT ON THE KNIFE AND THINK NO-ONE WILL NOTICE IT'S THE FOCAL
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 5:33 pm Post subject: |
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Sorrow wrote: | Queenston wrote: | the interwebz wrote: | Not understanding the focal... why is my attention being focused to the knife instead of... him. |
You realize that I intended the knife to be the focal?
holy fuck | HERPDERP, LETS PUT A GIANT LIGHT ON THE KNIFE AND THINK NO-ONE WILL NOTICE IT'S THE FOCAL |
HERPDERP, I INTENDED THE KNIFE TO BE THE FOCAL.
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Phox I post too much
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 6:47 pm Post subject: |
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I think that you should take away the bright light on the knife, and just brighten the knife a little. how you're going, the knife doesn't look shiny or powerful, it looks like there's a random splotch of yellow on the tag where your render's knife happens to be.
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 6:48 pm Post subject: |
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Queenston wrote: | Sorrow wrote: | Queenston wrote: | the interwebz wrote: | Not understanding the focal... why is my attention being focused to the knife instead of... him. |
You realize that I intended the knife to be the focal?
holy fuck | HERPDERP, LETS PUT A GIANT LIGHT ON THE KNIFE AND THINK NO-ONE WILL NOTICE IT'S THE FOCAL |
HERPDERP, I INTENDED THE KNIFE TO BE THE FOCAL. |
They know that, they just don't understand why you would make the knife the focal point.
I think o.o
Oh and the signature
It looks pretty decent, but I hate how the render is blended in like that, it's all blurry around the edges.
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 7:38 pm Post subject: |
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Odded wrote: | Queenston wrote: | Sorrow wrote: | Queenston wrote: | the interwebz wrote: | Not understanding the focal... why is my attention being focused to the knife instead of... him. |
You realize that I intended the knife to be the focal?
holy fuck | HERPDERP, LETS PUT A GIANT LIGHT ON THE KNIFE AND THINK NO-ONE WILL NOTICE IT'S THE FOCAL |
HERPDERP, I INTENDED THE KNIFE TO BE THE FOCAL. |
They know that, they just don't understand why you would make the knife the focal point.
I think o.o
Oh and the signature
It looks pretty decent, but I hate how the render is blended in like that, it's all blurry around the edges. |
Yeah, it wasn't the best stock to work with, it faded to black which was weird.
Thanks for the comments.
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 8:27 pm Post subject: |
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Queenston wrote: | the interwebz wrote: | Not understanding the focal... why is my attention being focused to the knife instead of... him. |
You realize that I intended the knife to be the focal?
holy fuck | That isn't a wise choice for a focal, and even so, you could have executed it better.
You asked for comments and criticism, this is my criticism.
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 8:34 pm Post subject: |
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the interwebz wrote: | Queenston wrote: | the interwebz wrote: | Not understanding the focal... why is my attention being focused to the knife instead of... him. |
You realize that I intended the knife to be the focal?
holy fuck | That isn't a wise choice for a focal, and even so, you could have executed it better.
You asked for comments and criticism, this is my criticism. |
That wasn't criticism in the first post, it was a question, the post you just made was a critique.
Anyways, k.
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Moments Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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Looks like you found an image, put the halo image over it, +used the eraser tool. Then some text, of course.
How did you make it? O:
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 9:46 pm Post subject: |
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Sorrow wrote: | Looks like you found an image, put the halo image over it, +used the eraser tool. Then some text, of course.
How did you make it? O: |
Stock, filters and adjustments, added C4Ds, lighting, burn, dodge, sponge, adjustments, star stock, dust stock, adjustments, text, adjustments
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 1:19 am Post subject: |
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The knife looks really really lame. If you can get rid of the yellow and the yellow stars it would look much better.
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