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 Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:34 pm Post subject: Thoughts on this sound? |
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http://soundcloud.com/zacharymoneaux/chill-out-v1
I still have a lot of polishing to do as well as another main section and an outro. This is my first piece of music made on the computer, and my first time really using a DAW, so I could use any amount of criticism. Gannok has already suggested I pan parts of the music, which I will do soon.
I also know the heartbeat sounds weird and metallic, I'll fix that.
Also, could anyone help me figure out what genre this falls into? I started off making dubstep...and...well I don't know what the fuck happened, but it sounds nice and I like it.
Also need to turn down the kick in the intro a bit.
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| asciicat wrote: | cannot be classified
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ORLY?
Also..mfw everything sounds balanced through my headphones.
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| Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | cannot be classified
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Also..mfw everything sounds balanced through my headphones. |
everything should be balanced. I don't like it, I'll be honest. Listen to this and tell me if its chill or not: http://soundcloud.com/tritone-1/bmaj-ambient
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| asciicat wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | cannot be classified
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Also..mfw everything sounds balanced through my headphones. |
everything should be balanced. I don't like it, I'll be honest. Listen to this and tell me if its chill or not: http://soundcloud.com/tritone-1/bmaj-ambient |
Ja it's chill 
And can you tell me why you don't like it? I could use the feedback.
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Dude...
This sucks
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This sucks |
What didn't you liek lol. Can't fix anything without feedback.
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| Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | cannot be classified
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Also..mfw everything sounds balanced through my headphones. |
everything should be balanced. I don't like it, I'll be honest. Listen to this and tell me if its chill or not: http://soundcloud.com/tritone-1/bmaj-ambient |
Ja it's chill
And can you tell me why you don't like it? I could use the feedback. |
Hard to explain, its not entirely my taste. However, after listening to it a second time, I can shed some light on it. Its nice, actually, but a little too slow for my tastes. I like the "boom boom boom boom" stuff more. My headphones are great, but I can't hear much of the bass in http://www.mediafire.com/?xq11r1jun9m72un. When I listened to that in my car, I was amazed, it sounded so much better. So yeah, my music listening experience is diminished.
If I were you, I'd have half as many heart beats. Start the song sooner.
It sounds like its the entrance to an alien/zergish boss battle, or down a hallway leading toward your imminent demise.
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| asciicat wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | cannot be classified
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ORLY?
Also..mfw everything sounds balanced through my headphones. |
everything should be balanced. I don't like it, I'll be honest. Listen to this and tell me if its chill or not: http://soundcloud.com/tritone-1/bmaj-ambient |
Ja it's chill
And can you tell me why you don't like it? I could use the feedback. |
Hard to explain, its not entirely my taste. However, after listening to it a second time, I can shed some light on it. Its nice, actually, but a little too slow for my tastes. I like the "boom boom boom boom" stuff more. My headphones are great, but I can't hear much of the bass in http://www.mediafire.com/?xq11r1jun9m72un. When I listened to that in my car, I was amazed, it sounded so much better. So yeah, my music listening experience is diminished.
If I were you, I'd have half as many heart beats. Start the song sooner.
It sounds like its the entrance to an alien/zergish boss battle, or down a hallway leading toward your imminent demise. |
Creepy how I was just thinking of that o.o
Almost like you're walking in a dark...deserted...hospital....
Also, the heartbeat grows throughout the intro and stops when the voice says "chill out". I mean, I can change it I guess, how do you think it would sound good?
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| Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | cannot be classified
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ORLY?
Also..mfw everything sounds balanced through my headphones. |
everything should be balanced. I don't like it, I'll be honest. Listen to this and tell me if its chill or not: http://soundcloud.com/tritone-1/bmaj-ambient |
Ja it's chill
And can you tell me why you don't like it? I could use the feedback. |
Hard to explain, its not entirely my taste. However, after listening to it a second time, I can shed some light on it. Its nice, actually, but a little too slow for my tastes. I like the "boom boom boom boom" stuff more. My headphones are great, but I can't hear much of the bass in http://www.mediafire.com/?xq11r1jun9m72un. When I listened to that in my car, I was amazed, it sounded so much better. So yeah, my music listening experience is diminished.
If I were you, I'd have half as many heart beats. Start the song sooner.
It sounds like its the entrance to an alien/zergish boss battle, or down a hallway leading toward your imminent demise. |
Creepy how I was just thinking of that o.o
Almost like you're walking in a dark...deserted...hospital.... |
Wow. Or the desert at night, kind of like resident evil 3. Reminded me of this just now.
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| asciicat wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | asciicat wrote: | cannot be classified
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ORLY?
Also..mfw everything sounds balanced through my headphones. |
everything should be balanced. I don't like it, I'll be honest. Listen to this and tell me if its chill or not: http://soundcloud.com/tritone-1/bmaj-ambient |
Ja it's chill
And can you tell me why you don't like it? I could use the feedback. |
Hard to explain, its not entirely my taste. However, after listening to it a second time, I can shed some light on it. Its nice, actually, but a little too slow for my tastes. I like the "boom boom boom boom" stuff more. My headphones are great, but I can't hear much of the bass in http://www.mediafire.com/?xq11r1jun9m72un. When I listened to that in my car, I was amazed, it sounded so much better. So yeah, my music listening experience is diminished.
If I were you, I'd have half as many heart beats. Start the song sooner.
It sounds like its the entrance to an alien/zergish boss battle, or down a hallway leading toward your imminent demise. |
Creepy how I was just thinking of that o.o
Almost like you're walking in a dark...deserted...hospital.... |
Wow. Or the desert at night, kind of like resident evil 3. Reminded me of this just now. |
Seems more videogamey than mine.
Still don't know how to categorize it genre wise .____.
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| Evil_Intentions wrote: | | Shot wrote: | Dude...
This sucks |
What didn't you liek lol. Can't fix anything without feedback. |
now you know that feel bro.................
now you know...........
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| That fag wrote: | | Evil_Intentions wrote: | | Shot wrote: | Dude...
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What didn't you liek lol. Can't fix anything without feedback. |
now you know that feel bro.................
now you know........... |
that feel....
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