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I am Deadmaster
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Manips =D
and 1 non manip
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| Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 10:25 pm Post subject: |
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They looked ripped to me, but who am I to judge; you may just be a good artist.
Work on the text; otherwise, good job.
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| Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 4:08 am Post subject: |
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1. This is the best one you've shown and it shows huge potential when it comes to colouring, effects etc/. You should try learning to make your own C4Ds and try out abstract signatures some time, too. Only problem really is a few of the oversaturated C4Ds that are just Cyan (I can see one on the left and one streaming towards the right.) and I think you should make it look like the floor is marble or something and make it look like an actual real place but with your effects and such bouncing all over for some reason or another, Idk I'm not here to think up concepts for you.
2. Text is un-needed to be honest but I think that the tag would look very boring had you not added it. You can't really fix this because you've only added a dinosaur's head rather than anything else of the dinosaur, which kinda gives an awkward focal point considering it's just sticking out of a friggen tree. Lighting could use some work.
3. Pretty good but the astronaut is too bright at places which make him look flat and not really there. You could have done better with the text too.
Really hope you haven't ripped anything.
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I am Deadmaster
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| Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:00 pm Post subject: |
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I didn't RIP Anything.
And I would like to comment on some feedback you gave that was inaccurate.
First of all for the Dino Restroom sig
| Quote: | | 2. Text is un-needed to be honest but I think that the tag would look very boring had you not added it. You can't really fix this because you've only added a dinosaur's head rather than anything else of the dinosaur, which kinda gives an awkward focal point considering it's just sticking out of a friggen tree. Lighting could use some work. |
About the lighting, you must be INSANE if you say the lighting needs work. I actually OVERDID the lighting, and you are blind if you don't see it.
SECONDLY I DID NOT ONLY ADD A DINOSAUR HEAD, I DID SO MUCH WORK ON THAT SIG, FROM COLORING, TO LIGHTING, TO THE TREE.
DO YOU THINK THE TREE HAD A TOILET? NO! OFC NOT I ADDED THE TOILET TO THE TREE AND I DID A DAMN GOOD JOB WITH IT.
And how is it an "Awkward focal point"? How about you specify whats awkward, learn how to give real feedback, simple saying it's awkward is like simply saying it sucks, it doesn't what sucks, it doesn't specify anything.
| Quote: | | 1. This is the best one you've shown and it shows huge potential when it comes to colouring, effects etc/. You should try learning to make your own C4Ds and try out abstract signatures some time, too. Only problem really is a few of the oversaturated C4Ds that are just Cyan (I can see one on the left and one streaming towards the right.) and I think you should make it look like the floor is marble or something and make it look like an actual real place but with your effects and such bouncing all over for some reason or another, Idk I'm not here to think up concepts for you. |
THIS ONE HAS THE LEAST WORK DONE. All I did was throw a bunch of c4d, lighting, contrast adjustments and color balances. YET You claim it has "Huge Potential"
| Quote: | | 3. Pretty good but the astronaut is too bright at places which make him look flat and not really there. You could have done better with the text too. |
Well you noticed one thing which is true, but how is it flat? How does lighting make anything flat? The bright spots are because of the "Coffee" Which took a long to make >_> considering I rendered it out of falling water ( SEE ATTACHMENTS)
| Quote: | They looked ripped to me, but who am I to judge; you may just be a good artist.
Work on the text; otherwise, good job |
Thanks, and yea text is my weak point, I've been dwelling in photomanipulations, I used to do a lot of work with C4D.
See attachments for all the renders.
webchurch [dot] org/spaceman [dot] jpg
upload.wikimedia [dot] org/wikipedia/commons/6/60/Water_drops [dot] jpg
gallery.artofgregmartin [dot] com/tuts_arts/stars_images/11 [dot] jpg
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The toilet which I added to the tree
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| Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:11 pm Post subject: |
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You have got to stop criticizing how others critique your work.
Simply, you post here, your artwork will be rated, learn to cope with these remarks.
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| Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:22 pm Post subject: |
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| Muffin. wrote: | You have got to stop criticizing how others critique your work.
Simply, you post here, your artwork will be rated, learn to cope with these remarks. |
Well to me the sings look amazing, and I don't see anything wrong with the lighting or text or whatever, so I guess he took offense
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| Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:58 pm Post subject: |
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| looks fine.
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| Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:38 pm Post subject: |
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Calm the fuck down and learn to take critique.
The signatures look nice, but if someone's helpfully trying to offer their opinion, don't be so ignorant as to attempt to convict them of spouting nonsense.
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| Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 12:24 am Post subject: |
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=0 some1 doesn't liek to be criticized :0
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First of all for the Dino Restroom sig
| Quote: | | 2. Text is un-needed to be honest but I think that the tag would look very boring had you not added it. You can't really fix this because you've only added a dinosaur's head rather than anything else of the dinosaur, which kinda gives an awkward focal point considering it's just sticking out of a friggen tree. Lighting could use some work. |
About the lighting, you must be INSANE if you say the lighting needs work. I actually OVERDID the lighting, and you are blind if you don't see it.
SECONDLY I DID NOT ONLY ADD A DINOSAUR HEAD, I DID SO MUCH WORK ON THAT SIG, FROM COLORING, TO LIGHTING, TO THE TREE.
DO YOU THINK THE TREE HAD A TOILET? NO! OFC NOT I ADDED THE TOILET TO THE TREE AND I DID A DAMN GOOD JOB WITH IT.
And how is it an "Awkward focal point"? How about you specify whats awkward, learn how to give real feedback, simple saying it's awkward is like simply saying it sucks, it doesn't what sucks, it doesn't specify anything. |
By saying it's overdone you are agreeing that it's too much and that it is defective.
On the right side, you have an odd light source that seems off as it cancels it self out yet manages to illuminate everything. The light source is too far back in the background to strike the from of mountain and everything else from the front.
Then there's the volcanic explosion. I know it's meant to be smoke, but it's shooting out another light source upward and it's incomplete because it lacks illumination. Basically this what the volcano light source is doing:
@what I circled in blue: Background is forced, too much blur, and attempt at adding depth was overdone as it removed too much detail from the background. The sudden drop in quality of tree to the blurred mess of a background makes it look like you literally just slapped on a render on a smudged background. Example:
Not blended well at all.
Sig was nice, but it's a royal mess. You could have worked on things to make them look like they belonged in there together, but instead it all looks as if it's clashing with each other due to a lack of blending or any other detail that at least makes a smoother transition between what you added.
| Quote: | | Quote: | | 1. This is the best one you've shown and it shows huge potential when it comes to colouring, effects etc/. You should try learning to make your own C4Ds and try out abstract signatures some time, too. Only problem really is a few of the oversaturated C4Ds that are just Cyan (I can see one on the left and one streaming towards the right.) and I think you should make it look like the floor is marble or something and make it look like an actual real place but with your effects and such bouncing all over for some reason or another, Idk I'm not here to think up concepts for you. |
THIS ONE HAS THE LEAST WORK DONE. All I did was throw a bunch of c4d, lighting, contrast adjustments and color balances. YET You claim it has "Huge Potential" |
It's not a matter of how much you do, it's a matter of how it comes out.
| Quote: | | Quote: | | 3. Pretty good but the astronaut is too bright at places which make him look flat and not really there. You could have done better with the text too. |
Well you noticed one thing which is true, but how is it flat? How does lighting make anything flat? The bright spots are because of the "Coffee" Which took a long to make >_> considering I rendered it out of falling water ( SEE ATTACHMENTS) |
it's in too much contrast with surroundings and he looks like a paper cut out. There are few areas where you can grasp them as being 3 dimensional as the astronaut render lacks shadows and stuff. =0
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| Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 3:03 pm Post subject: |
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Yes I'd take your cnc, because it makes sense. And the blur thing, isn't actually blurred, that's the image I used, which had a bunch blurred circles, and "The Sun" Was one of those circles, which I made into the sun, because there was nothing else I could do. The volcano, was pretty much slapped on, I barely worked on it, so I agree the lighting on the volcano messes with the lighting in general. I'm still working out those areas, but I do like my concept.
I'll work on it, if you want.
| Bisa wrote: | Calm the fuck down and learn to take critique.
The signatures look nice, but if someone's helpfully trying to offer their opinion, don't be so ignorant as to attempt to convict them of spouting nonsense. |
Sorry, I just don't like that guys cnc, he didn't specify anything, he was basically saying it just to say it.
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| Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 3:07 pm Post subject: |
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chill out.
Harry Brown/Connor is one of the better artists on this forum in my opinion, don't get too defensive. 
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| Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 4:22 pm Post subject: |
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| Harry Brown wrote: | | 2.Lighting could use some work. |
First post, Harry brown points out that lightning could use some work
| I am Deadmaster wrote: | | About the lighting, you must be INSANE if you say the lighting needs work. I actually OVERDID the lighting, and you are blind if you don't see it. |
Your reply.
Explains
| I am Deadmaster wrote: | | so I agree the lighting on the volcano messes with the lighting in general. I'm still working out those areas |
Basically you agreed with the post you first flamed. If you need people to point out what needs work then ask instead of TYPING OUT YOUR USELESS REPLY IN CAPS.
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| I thought you'd take it well, considering you aren't that bad. You're a fucking stupid little kid, just like a lot of the idiots that think they're godly over here, aka Vao.
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I am Deadmaster
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| Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 5:46 pm Post subject: |
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| Harry Brown wrote: | | I thought you'd take it well, considering you aren't that bad. You're a fucking stupid little kid, just like a lot of the idiots that think they're godly over here, aka Vao. |
I was mad in general cuz of the cnc, and decided to flame anything he said, but I stepped out of that rage, it's all good.
And, NO
I DO NOT THINK IM GODLY
I'm part of fringefx [dot] net
And most of the people there are 9999x better than anyone on this forum.
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| I am Deadmaster wrote: | | Harry Brown wrote: | | I thought you'd take it well, considering you aren't that bad. You're a fucking stupid little kid, just like a lot of the idiots that think they're godly over here, aka Vao. |
I was mad in general cuz of the cnc, and decided to flame anything he said, but I stepped out of that rage, it's all good.
And, NO
I DO NOT THINK IM GODLY
I'm part of fringefx [dot] net
And most of the people there are 9999x better than anyone on this forum. |
I was at Fringe when it was first made. I'm good friends with both Keith and Matt. Don't speak down to me as if I don't know about these places, bro.
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