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redslothx Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 2:32 am Post subject: =0 new sig |
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think i overdid something here =x
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Hyaxor Master Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:00 am Post subject: |
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It looks pretty cool, but I don't really know what to look at. |
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emil Expert Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:53 am Post subject: |
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There's too much focus on the LG, it stands out too much. This has potential, though. |
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trebor Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 10:28 am Post subject: |
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Dim overall sig, then add light.
Also, blur LG. |
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Moments Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 12:37 pm Post subject: |
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Looks great IMO, just dim LG |
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redslothx Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 12:45 pm Post subject: |
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like this? O.o? _________________
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trebor Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:41 pm Post subject: |
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That's a bit better. |
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:00 pm Post subject: |
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Really great piece here, imo the only thing I don't like is the text on the right. |
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ShadowHopeful Expert Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:13 pm Post subject: |
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agreed.
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 5:33 am Post subject: |
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Assuming this is RSX, one of your best pieces imo. |
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:09 am Post subject: |
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I'm not sure about the bit on the far left, but the rest is awesome.
Also, I'm not sure how much of this is stock, but if you did that LG then that's fucking amazing. |
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emil Expert Cheater
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:44 am Post subject: |
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That's much better now. However, that text on the far right seems to annoy my eyes a bit. |
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I am Deadmaster Newbie cheater
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:55 pm Post subject: |
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The lighting is off, there needs to be more depth, create some sort of contrast between foreground and background, colorwise, depthwise, light wise, anyways, just do it.
Other than that, the sig would be okay in every area except creativity.
There is no creativity in the sig, I don't see effects catching my eye, all I see is a simple c4d, and what seems to be a gradient and photofilter.
The lighting isn't done well either. |
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