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Thoughts? I know the text sucks, I was trying something new and it didn't exactly work out. It may be bright for some of you since my screen is at a lower resolution than most people.
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I like my text fainted, although I still need to work on it.
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| Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:35 am Post subject: |
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Wow, that actually looks really good.
I like how the ice goes around him in a spiral, good work.
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| Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:36 am Post subject: |
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| Red &qu wrote: | Wow, that actually looks really good.
I like how the ice goes around him in a spiral, good work. |
Sadly, that was part of the render.
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| Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:37 am Post subject: |
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Then I think you should have done more.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 3:20 am Post subject: |
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| Red &qu wrote: | | Then I think you should have done more. |
I agree. Once you think about the sig, and start looking at it after you realize that it was part of the render, it looks too simple.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 4:13 am Post subject: |
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I suggest pattern overlay/gradient blends maybe.. work with blending layers and see what you come up with and work on your text, thats way to faint to read
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| Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 4:24 am Post subject: |
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| Vao wrote: | | I suggest pattern overlay/gradient blends maybe.. work with blending layers and see what you come up with and work on your text, thats way to faint to read |
I actually didn't realize there was any text whatsoever until I read this post and reexamined the picture. |
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| Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 9:12 am Post subject: |
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| Vao wrote: | | I suggest pattern overlay/gradient blends maybe.. work with blending layers and see what you come up with and work on your text, thats way to faint to read |
Pattern overlay? Don't give fucking pathetic advice. That would just make it look like a stereotypical newbie piece.
You should darken it up a little bit. The brightness of the background along with the text and 'effects' you've got going on just don't go well. The background just looks like a mildly edited C4D, too. There aren't any varying colours (try to fix that by putting slightly darker or lighter colours on different layers with soft brushes, the smudging them into the flow of the tag earlier on) and it just looks far too bright. |
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| Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 8:25 pm Post subject: |
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lol epic advise
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| Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 11:03 am Post subject: |
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| Vao wrote: | lol epic advise
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*advice
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Okay it is way to light, you may like it light and your text light but you don't want to make it so light that the text is barely readable..
Needs to look something like this
I just used the burn tool on your original project and took away a lot of the light.
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