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Cryoma
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 Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 9:22 pm Post subject: A Quality Shoop. |
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Feedback please.
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| Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 10:04 pm Post subject: |
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| Other then fact picture make you like lady.....is good ^^ |
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| Bad text is bad. |
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Cryoma
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| Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 10:36 pm Post subject: |
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I don't get how I look like a girl.
Also, pixel text. |
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| Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 11:02 pm Post subject: |
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looks like a girl
there's no distinct features that indicate guy.
Hair is too "girl style"
as for the img itself,
Light on right side is too strong for it's own good.
glasses are too blurred when compared to the rest of the face.
line thingys on left side look forced.
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 12:35 am Post subject: |
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i would give it 6/10
it's better than others, but yea. you kinda look like a girl and the blur used on the right side isn't that good.
and the font is all uglyish :p
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 11:08 am Post subject: Re: A Quality Shoop. |
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| Cryoma wrote: | Feedback please.
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huge white softbrush on the right (Doesn't look good at all) and some brushing or polar coordinated lines that burst outwards in boring grey colours. Jesus man, what the hell? |
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Cryoma
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 6:13 pm Post subject: |
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| I'm taking an art class and was playing around with contrast, which is part of an assignment. |
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:49 am Post subject: |
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| Cryoma wrote: | | I'm taking an art class and was playing around with contrast, which is part of an assignment. |
I can teach you some shit if you want. |
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:39 am Post subject: |
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| Talix wrote: | | konr wrote: | | Cryoma wrote: | | I'm taking an art class and was playing around with contrast, which is part of an assignment. |
I can teach you some shit if you want. |
5 basics:
Focal
Coloring
Depth
Flow
Lighting
Without all of those done correctly, your piece will be incomplete. |
Don't be so rude.
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:59 am Post subject: Re: A Quality Shoop. |
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| Cryoma wrote: | Feedback please.
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the light is to bright on the right side its killing the picture and also bad test fix it... |
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 12:38 pm Post subject: |
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that seriously looks like a girl o_o
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Cryoma
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| Talix wrote: | | konr wrote: | | Cryoma wrote: | | I'm taking an art class and was playing around with contrast, which is part of an assignment. |
I can teach you some shit if you want. |
5 basics:
Focal
Coloring
Depth
Flow
Lighting
Without all of those done correctly, your piece will fail. |
That's so incorrect that it's hilarious. |
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| Cryoma wrote: | | Talix wrote: | | konr wrote: | | Cryoma wrote: | | I'm taking an art class and was playing around with contrast, which is part of an assignment. |
I can teach you some shit if you want. |
5 basics:
Focal
Coloring
Depth
Flow
Lighting
Without all of those done correctly, your piece will fail. |
That's so incorrect that it's hilarious. |
No it isn't. It isn't at all. |
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Cryoma
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 3:11 pm Post subject: |
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| konr wrote: | | Cryoma wrote: | | Talix wrote: | | konr wrote: | | Cryoma wrote: | | I'm taking an art class and was playing around with contrast, which is part of an assignment. |
I can teach you some shit if you want. |
5 basics:
Focal
Coloring
Depth
Flow
Lighting
Without all of those done correctly, your piece will fail. |
That's so incorrect that it's hilarious. |
No it isn't. It isn't at all. |
The part about it failing unless it includes all 5 of those basics is what's wrong. |
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