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Kronos Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 11:24 am Post subject: |
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Lacks depth and text distracts from focal, overall looks boring.
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NooksCranny Master Cheater
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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 11:58 am Post subject: |
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| Well.. I'll be frankly honest it lacks almost everything. You need to improve the lighting, depth, text, smudges, and theres not much going for it. Maybe spice it up!
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 4:00 pm Post subject: |
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| Ryuuki Corvin wrote: | | Kronos wrote: | | Lacks depth and text distracts from focal, overall looks boring. |
I know it looks boring, but go a little easier on me its one of my first ever sigs.
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You can't use the fact that you're inexperienced as an excuse, it's not our fault you didn't bother practicing before showing us a work of yours that you put effort into.
Anyways, it's bad. Practice more though, and you will get better.
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~Pineapple! Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 4:16 pm Post subject: |
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Boring and bland.
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~Lucifer~ Expert Cheater
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Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 4:26 pm Post subject: |
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| what the others said is true. you need more practice, but I dont think it is horrible. maybe work on my skills then try and redo do this one. 2/5
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:21 am Post subject: |
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| I don't know why but I actually like it...
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:25 am Post subject: |
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I like it , its nice for your starting. though you may wanna try to make this effect.
that render is perfect for it. duplicate the layer at least 4 times and mode each layer to the right a little, the ones behind more than then ones ontop, and play a little with the opacity , like a step fade effect.
also instead of that transparent border you should go better with a solid black movieframe like border so it kinda gives it a sharp mood.
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