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Monkeys I post too much
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 10:19 am Post subject: Poems |
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I think I've posted one of my older poems here too, but can't find the thread.
So I'm making a new one
Today, out of boredom at work, I wrote a poem at inspiratum. (Yes, I know, that's not a word.... Or is it?)
So a small idea, whenever we get bored, we write a little poem :] And I know you all get bored.
Here's mine. Haven't got a tittle yet, though.
For so many years and ages gone,
so many loves and heartbreaks done.
This life, seemingly full of blame,
irreplacable, just the same.
For all the years and ages gone,
so many loves have made two, one.
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noko_112 Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 10:24 am Post subject: |
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I dont get the last line, but the rest of it is good
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Monkeys I post too much
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 10:37 am Post subject: |
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| Noko_112 wrote: | I dont get the last line, but the rest of it is good  |
Love made two (people) into one.
I took a bit of poetic freedom there :3
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Zycno Master Cheater
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 2:19 pm Post subject: |
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nice like it i love poems can u PM me some more ?
(Your Own Work )
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 2:33 pm Post subject: |
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its cool dude but i hope u did not get tht from some 1 else
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Monkeys I post too much
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 4:31 pm Post subject: |
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Just wrote it on TBF.
I've written quite a few poems in the past, around the age of 14.
None really that great, since most of them have a quite somber touch to it. (Which is so easy)
A few are quite beautiful though, and have been published a few times, but I'll post those once I see some more in here
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