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Slappy101 I post too much
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 8:08 pm Post subject: [After Effects] Street Explosion |
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This was done based off of a tutorial cause I'm still learning how to use After Effects and it's pretty cool. The audio may be out of sync due to importing into Flash. The first footage is the original and the second is the modified.
http://up2share.com/view/k8ku4py1g
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rayz321 Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 8:21 pm Post subject: |
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the somke neds to dispures more and not stay so black
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 8:50 pm Post subject: |
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fire needs to be more spread out, the smoke from the fire is way too dark
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Slappy101 I post too much
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 8:58 pm Post subject: |
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I'll try decreasing the darkness of the smoke, but the explosion is started inside a parking garage so it wouldn't spread that far out into the street.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:02 pm Post subject: |
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Slappy101 wrote: | I'll try decreasing the darkness of the smoke, but the explosion is started inside a parking garage so it wouldn't spread that far out into the street. |
are u going to add more explosions like a building explosion?
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Sharpies! Master Cheater
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:31 pm Post subject: |
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Basically what they said, lighten up on the smoke.
I know it starts in the garage so it wouldn't spread that far, but it would still be more interesting if it did.
P.S - your debris on the ground disappears randomly for the last few frames of the explosion.
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Slappy101 I post too much
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:46 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks, I'll extend the footage on the debris. I may be able to add patches of fire in the street,
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 9:50 pm Post subject: |
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Looks sexy.
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noko_112 Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 11:51 am Post subject: |
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Debri on ground just dissapper. Fix it
You have to look close on it
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Simon :v Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:22 pm Post subject: |
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I like how the people don't even notice the big-ass explosion of flames that just occurred.
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Cryoma Member of the Year
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:24 pm Post subject: |
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Debris should come out a lot quicker.
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redslothx Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 2:05 pm Post subject: |
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Make the smoke more fused into the fire. It looks like a separate entity. Also, get rid of the cloud-like appearance.
Apollo wrote: | fire needs to be more spread out, the smoke from the fire is way too dark |
Smoke from an explosion is supposed to be black.
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Slappy101 I post too much
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 2:18 pm Post subject: |
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[AM]Misery wrote: | I like how the people don't even notice the big-ass explosion of flames that just occurred. |
Ya, but the hobo with the garbage bags was cool.
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nwongfeiying Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 5:49 pm Post subject: |
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That's awesome :O
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:34 pm Post subject: |
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FangBanger wrote: | Make the smoke more fused into the fire. It looks like a separate entity. Also, get rid of the cloud-like appearance.
Apollo wrote: | fire needs to be more spread out, the smoke from the fire is way too dark |
Smoke from an explosion is supposed to be black. |
uhhh not that black because after it enters the air it fades out faster then u can blink
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