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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:41 pm Post subject: pippi chan fan art finished |
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puresick Expert Cheater
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| Pretty decent :]
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Simon :v Grandmaster Cheater
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| Pretty good, but the way you drew her frame makes her seem like she has no bones. ;_;
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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| Work on shading and the background doesn't blend. Nice drawing but you could have used the outline far better.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:33 am Post subject: |
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photoshop vector stroke just sucks xP Its finished like that. I'll use illustrator next time xP
background is fine, its supposed to be an On Top piece with simple background because its not a Long piece but a wallpaper.
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Phox I post too much
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:37 am Post subject: |
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| [AM]Misery wrote: | | Pretty good, but the way you drew her frame makes her seem like she has no bones. ;_; |
I agree. Her shoulders also sort of bubble out in a cartoonish, enreal way. The shading is good though I think.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:38 am Post subject: |
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shoulders look very off, looks very off balance
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Cryoma Member of the Year
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| It's meh, you've done better.
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Benji. Cheater
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:09 pm Post subject: |
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Hooray for moderators who delete my post.
I don't get it why you drew/painted the hair like this, could you tell me?
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gogodr I post too much
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| it is like that isn't it ?
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Benji. Cheater
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:50 pm Post subject: |
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| Ehm i don't understand you but i mean.. why did you paint it black/gray?
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:17 pm Post subject: |
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| Roytje wrote: | | Ehm i don't understand you but i mean.. why did you paint it black/gray? |
dark greyish was supposed to be shadow in hair >.>....
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To0k' Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:28 pm Post subject: |
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10 times better then what I could do, you should learn me that once
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Dillonz Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 8:44 pm Post subject: |
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| It's decent but where are the elbows? The shine in the hair could be a bit better as well.
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Rawrtard Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 11:13 am Post subject: |
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I don't like the eyes and the shine on the hair otherwise very nice.
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