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MaximuS I post too much
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| Good job but Ulquiorra's looks like he has no neck.
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Great effects, but i think the smudging doesn't look good. Maybe because it doesn't flow?
Truthfully i don't like it, but you did a great job.
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Here is my critic, sorry but I'll be a bit harsh
it sucks xP because of the following
you know you need to improve a loooooooooooot more your drawing
I mean >.> look at ichigo's head and Ulquihorra well completely , body is wrong and head too.
about the effect , its too smooth for what you wanted to achieve I'll make a little video so you get to know how to make this effect sharp without loosing the quality.
I'll record it after getting some sleep xP
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| gogodr wrote: | Here is my critic, sorry but I'll be a bit harsh
it sucks xP because of the following
you know you need to improve a loooooooooooot more your drawing
I mean >.> look at ichigo's head and Ulquihorra well completely , body is wrong and head too.
about the effect , its too smooth for what you wanted to achieve I'll make a little video so you get to know how to make this effect sharp without loosing the quality.
I'll record it after getting some sleep xP |
This. u need to improve.
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| What is wrong with Ichigo's face, hands and sword?
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gogodr I post too much
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I realized that It would be imposible to do the force effect I mentioned before without a tablet xP but still if you want I can make the tutorial on it
this is a rough preview
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I'd like that tut.
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Muazam Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Thanks for the comment guys.
I suck at drawing, I was just testing if I could add effects and colors to them..
I think it went kinda well.
Ulqiuorra's neck, totally forgot it.
Ichigo got fcked >,< I gave up re-drawing him.. but at least I got his hair right?!
I'm trying to improve my drawing and I shall check some color tutorials too, next time I'm making these.
Gogodr, I don't really need it, but thanks anyway =P
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