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S3NSA :3
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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| Only suggestions would be that the C4D could be more influenced by the star like pattern and the most distant looking part of the C4D could be behind the text seeing as it seems to be further away (as suggested by the apparent depth of field).
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NooksCranny Master Cheater
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| I love the depth you used on the C4D. It really brings the piece to life. Great Piece, and i can't believe you made this from scratch.
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is the transparent Universe suppost 2 be there?
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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| idiot_from_sky wrote: | | is the transparent Universe suppost 2 be there? |
No.
It magically appeared there.
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To0k' Grandmaster Cheater
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I like the C4D, It's just a little blurry imo.
Nice portfolio.
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Here's what I came up with after working with it for a bit.
It fails horribly, but there ya go.
I think I ruined it actually ._.
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sponge I'm a spammer
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 2:13 pm Post subject: |
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Don't like it at all.
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Dillonz Grandmaster Cheater
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| Some of the edges are rough.
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| I can see some pixelated parts anything else is great :p basic shapes but the effects are nice.
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Mobsy Master Cheater
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:25 pm Post subject: |
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I quite like the main abstract shape. However, I don't really see it fitting into that background particularly well. I think it may be the text.
Have you tried it without the text, just leaving a field of stars (although perhaps you could make them a bit more complex and detailed if the text was to be taken off), and putting text in a more subtle way in a different position?
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