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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 3
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:01 am Post subject: [Sig] Eclipse. [Updated Again.] |
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My first attempt at a real signature. Never really tried before. It's not done and I'd appreciate some helpful comments. Talix's comments are also welcomed. Designed from scratch with one brush and a circle.
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 22
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:11 am Post subject: |
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dduude
that's a win first sig
the smudging, the yellow that goes over that black
looks pwnage
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 3
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:11 am Post subject: |
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Cheers, appreciate your support.
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Kronos Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 0
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:46 am Post subject: |
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Looks cool. Dont like the color tho.
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Strathe Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 0
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:52 am Post subject: |
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Nice for a first try. A lil too darkened though in my opinion.
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 3
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 6:13 am Post subject: |
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Made for the SOTW theme: Eclipse.
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 22
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 6:25 am Post subject: |
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Lmfao, just noticed, don't know if it's that font, but it says Eclifse :|
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 3
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 6:26 am Post subject: |
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Lol, zoom in. Part of the P is missing. It's covered by yellow smudge. It's in pixel text so it's blocky.
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Phixen I post too much Reputation: 0
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 6:26 am Post subject: |
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Viral wrote: | Lmfao, just noticed, don't know if it's that font, but it says Eclifse :| |
No, it's Eclipse. Part of the P got covered.
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 22
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 6:27 am Post subject: |
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Phixen wrote: | Viral wrote: | Lmfao, just noticed, don't know if it's that font, but it says Eclifse :| |
No, it's Eclipse. Part of the P got covered. |
Ahhh I see.
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 3
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 6:53 am Post subject: |
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:3 Is okai. I got it covered. [Updated]
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S3NSA :3 Reputation: 1
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 8:00 am Post subject: |
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First of all, don't try and do too much. You're ruining your sig by adding too much. It really doesn't need the paint drips, or any of the added lines like in version four, although the blue ones do work fairly well I think a little more subtlety is needed. The text doesn't go, it's sharp and blocky which goes against that of the signature.
Read these two lessons and reconsider where you went wrong:
http://www.webmonkey.com/tutorial/Web_Typography_Tutorial_-_Lesson_1
http://www.webmonkey.com/tutorial/Web_Typography_Tutorial_-_Lesson_2
The signature is nice, it's dark and grungy and it works, just needs some tweaking.
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 45
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:42 pm Post subject: Re: [Sig] Eclipse. [Updated.] |
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r34p3r wrote: | My first attempt at a real signature. Never really tried before. It's not done and I'd appreciate some helpful comments. Talix's comments are also welcomed. Designed from scratch with one brush and a circle.
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Bold made me lol.
Also, 2nd is best, since text is actually visible, I would recommend a brightness and contrast adjustment layer, and brightening the image a bit.
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 3
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 8:51 pm Post subject: |
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Updated.
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 9:01 pm Post subject: |
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I don't like the drip or the smudge inside the black hole.
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