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krazedkat · Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 10:44 pm Post subject: My writing

Mostly persuasive/articles but I will put some creative writing up soon....
http://blog.semtro.co.cc

hcavolsdsadgadsg · Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 11:07 pm Post subject:

You need to work on keeping the flow of the writing, it reads clunky.

DKMikey · Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 11:11 pm Post subject:

Many passive/be verbs, use AV verbs.

"I believe" is not exactly needed in your type of article

Grammar sucks (no offense, learn some syntax)

Use different mechanics, such as hyphens, semi-colons, dashes, but use them properly.

Other than that you have a good voice.

krazedkat · Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 4:36 pm Post subject:

Isn't a hyphen a dash?

iGod · Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 5:14 pm Post subject:

Phixen · Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 5:57 pm Post subject:

Dash:

--punctuation mark: a short horizontal line used as a punctuation mark, often in place of a comma or colon, or as a sign that certain letters or words have been omitted

Hyphen:

-- dash showing word break: a punctuation mark (-) used at the end of a line when a word must be divided, or to link elements in a compound word or phrase

krazedkat · Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 6:02 pm Post subject:

/= slash ALWAYS NOT dash... -.-