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S.W.E.D Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 0
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 6:16 am Post subject: My Art |
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I will try update this as much as possible!
(Magic Mush)
(Dragon W/ BG as a Samsung Instinct)
(Sonic)
(T-Pain)
(I'm the one on the far left FYI)
(2nd Favorite Sport)
(Bear Paw for my Native Friend)
Rate 1-10, Good Comments Welcome, Bad Comments Welcome If You Explain WHY?
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Brookliny Master Cheater Reputation: 0
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 6:18 am Post subject: |
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Nice nice nice..
You one with glasses?
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S.W.E.D Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 0
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 6:22 am Post subject: |
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YUP! and thanks.. and for everyone els.. i WANT you to be negative but in a good way.. ex. I dont like #6.. BECAUSE it doesnt blend together good (i know lol) (i just need this because it will make me learn from my mistakes!
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 130
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 10:06 am Post subject: |
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Magic Mush :-
I geniunley think it looks pretty cool. I can't really crit something like this. Except that you probably didn't actually do anything other than copy paste a few pictures and use some blending modes. Although, I see C4Ds at the sides that are faded. That looks suckish because low opacity (Or Soft light) should never happen with C4Ds.
Dragon W/BG as a Samsung Instinct :-
Wow, I fucking hate that effect. Okay once again you've not really done much youreslf other than copy paste a dragon and use some basic filters. I can't crit this. Although the enboss and glow REALLY isn't a good effect. At all. Stop it.
Sonic :-
Way too small, low qulity render, shitty effect again like I said before. YOu've also added LQ text which doesn't suit the theme at all. On top of that, you've added two lines with the default colour for outer glow. Never do that, it makes you look like a newbie straight away.
T-Pain :-
NEVER use that kind of effect over the top of a render. NEVER emboss a render. NEVER emboss all of your text and use annoying ebossing and flashy effects ontop of every last thing on the piece. I dislike it so much I can't even bein to critisize.
A bunch of faggots. Especially the one of the right with the glasses. :-
No... Just no...
Snowboard :-
It's better than the rest but you don't seem to have done much yourself, again. You've used a C4D (Seemingly on colour dodge or linear dodge) on a gradient background. You've then used either the cloud effect of an actual picture of clouds. Possibly a smudge picture and you've plopped it on and it really doesn't fit that well. If you're going to use an effect like that at least use it all over the sig, not just one part. You've then used a C4D and added a glow to it. NEVER DO THAT WITH C4DS OR RENDERS. Another thing to touch upon is the blur behind the render and how it makes it look VERY low quality. Work on depth, quality, consistency, text, not using that fucking annoying piece of shit effect of embossing and scanlines etc/. etc/.
Bear paw :-
Blue and red do not go together. You've just used a C4D and some useless shit which doesn't look good. See above comments for more on the embossing subject etc/.
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor Reputation: 16
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 11:15 am Post subject: |
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The overuse of bevel ruins everything.
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Arcobaleno I post too much Reputation: 0
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 11:29 am Post subject: |
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LOVE the first 2 pics.
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