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this thread [b]IS[\b] serious
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Xanatos
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 7:11 pm Post subject: |
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| GFCM wrote: | this thread [b]IS[\b] serious
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No da ppl from da intrawebs say are, lurn ur grammur again.
Anyways I'm back, a buffing up from some insane words would be nice, and the opinion I have to prove is hard, what I have to do is choose a main character from the story and explain the character's dominant character trait and what effect it has on the story.
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 7:13 pm Post subject: |
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| Xanatos wrote: | | GFCM wrote: | this thread [b]IS[\b] serious
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No da ppl from da intrawebs say are, lurn ur grammur again.
Anyways I'm back, a buffing up from some insane words would be nice, and the opinion I have to prove is hard, what I have to do is choose a main character from the story and explain the character's dominant character trait and what effect it has on the story. |
Sounds simple, but seeing as I have never heard of the book you are reporting on I really shouldn't say that.
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Xanatos
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Its a short story so there aren't many examples. The story is literally two pages long ._.
I've reviewed all the actions of the character I'm doing, Klutter Kobra and that's the best and only point I can make out of it.
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 7:16 pm Post subject: |
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| Xanatos wrote: | Its a short story so there aren't many examples. The story is literally two pages long ._.
I've reviewed all the actions of the character I'm doing, Klutter Kobra and that's the best and only point I can make out of it. |
olawdy...
I dunno.
I just remembered I have major assignment to do now too.
lol peace
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Xanatos
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 7:22 pm Post subject: |
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Bai!!
Ani can you beef dis up in <5 mins I gtg soon D:
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Priscilla and the Wimps
The character Klutter Kobra, from the story “Priscilla and the Wimps” by <insert name>, has a conceited personality. This trait helps constitute Klutter Kobra’s exploitative orientation. People with this type of character orientation tend do whatever they can to get what they want; even if it includes stealing something from somebody else just to get it. For example, Klutter Kobra’s appearance is tailored to make him appear tougher then he really is. <Insert quote of describing him cutting his nails with a knife>. This quote shows how he would consciously take the time to give himself “a manicure” with a knife, instead of the intended tools, a nail cutter and file. The effect of this trait on the story is that it is an essential part of the crisis. Klutter Kobra’s narcissism resulted in him acting arrogant, in front of Priscilla. <Insert quote about Klutter being shoved into a locker>. Klutter Kobra’s actions provoked Priscilla to take physical action against him, when she could’ve walked away. <Insert concluding statement>. |
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| Quote: | The character Klutter Kobra, from the story “Priscilla and the Wimps” by <insert name>, has a very conceited personality. This helps to better constitute his exploitative nature. A prime example would be the appearance of Klutter Kobra, which is tailored to make him appear more of a ruffian than he truly is. Individuals with this type of character orientation tend to be very covetous; even if it includes stealing something from others.
<Insert quote of describing him cutting his nails with a knife>
This quote shows how he would consciously take the time to give himself “a manicure” with a knife instead of the intended tools, like the nail cutter or the file.
The effect this trait will have on the story, is that it is an essential part of the crisis. Klutter Kobra’s narcissism resulted in him acting arrogantly in front of Priscilla, which contributed to her anger towards him.
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- Took out some spelling errors (forgotten words, misusage of words).
- Changed the sentence buildup.
- Changed some words/sentences.
Best I can do mate,
Ani
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Xanatos
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| Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 7:34 pm Post subject: |
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TYx2000000000
Your power is maximum :O
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