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| Where's the feet?
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Simon :v
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| Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 4:55 pm Post subject: |
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| Rozen wrote: | | Where's the feet? |
Higurashi'ed off.
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Dillonz
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| Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:21 pm Post subject: |
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| tayt3rtot wrote: | | Dillonz wrote: | | I think you should redo the whole thing. |
A bit mean. Its okay Though Good job use more tuts ect. lalala lol |
Not really mean. I'm not saying it's bad just there's minors flaws. The thing is there is a lot. So instead of fixing it, improve from the mistakes.
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Clairenix
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Well, you guys don't have to hold back. IMO the anatomy is REALLY fucked up. I still suck at drawing since I just started doing it recently and had school to go with it and etc.
Though with your comments on the hands =O I have to disagree. I think the problem is the arms not the hands it self.
and Gogodr, avoiding to draw hands won't help me ;____; thanks though.
Thanks for your comments and suggestions guys, I really appreciate it.
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Dillonz
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| Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:40 pm Post subject: |
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| Clairenix wrote: | "]Well, you guys don't have to hold back. IMO the anatomy is REALLY fucked up. I still suck at drawing since I just started doing it recently and had school to go with it and etc.
Though with your comments on the hands =O I have to disagree. I think the problem is the arms not the hands it self.
and Gogodr, avoiding to draw hands won't help me ;____; thanks though.
Thanks for your comments and suggestions guys, I really appreciate it. |
The problems are the arms, face and just the left side of her chest (Her left), seems unnatural because it's curving inward. Also, you're not really bad at this. I've seen other things you've done  Also just a suggestion with the hands, maybe make the fingers longer?
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| Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:18 pm Post subject: |
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| if you want to draw people, learn human anatomy, your proportions are hosed.
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| Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 9:44 pm Post subject: Re: My newest~! |
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| Clairenix wrote: | "]http://clairenix.deviantart.com/art/A-white-dress-140765894
I took a different style of shading and IMO it looks alot better. |
You did the eyes wrong, the face is looking to the left, not straight at you, while the eyes are looking at you.
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Clairenix
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| Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:59 am Post subject: Re: My newest~! |
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| jaspher. wrote: | | Clairenix wrote: | "]http://clairenix.deviantart.com/art/A-white-dress-140765894
I took a different style of shading and IMO it looks alot better. |
You did the eyes wrong, the face is looking to the left, not straight at you, while the eyes are looking at you. |
Oh but seriously, you could face at someone and still have your eyes looking at the sides =O.
anyway I think you guys got every flaw down, thanks alot. :3
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