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Monkeys
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Wrong, Phox. Black outlines can work in some cases. But mostly they're bad, yeah.
And Akaeuis something :s Your art is nice, but looks quite cardboardy.
As far as I can tell, you basicly shade in one direction? (To the middle, for the sword, for example)
Don't. :3
Swords aren't triangle shaped.
Every curve in an item should add something to an item. Even if it's only a #000001 difference.
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| Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:26 pm Post subject: |
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| Monkeys wrote: | Wrong, Phox. Black outlines can work in some cases. But mostly they're bad, yeah.
And Akaeuis something :s Your art is nice, but looks quite cardboardy.
As far as I can tell, you basicly shade in one direction? (To the middle, for the sword, for example)
Don't. :3
Swords aren't triangle shaped.
Every curve in an item should add something to an item. Even if it's only a #000001 difference. |
Is this an insult?
Will try the criticism I just don't like your insults ;-;.
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Monkeys
I post too much
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| Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:41 pm Post subject: |
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| Akaecius the Leapfrog wrote: | | Monkeys wrote: | Wrong, Phox. Black outlines can work in some cases. But mostly they're bad, yeah.
And Akaeuis something :s Your art is nice, but looks quite cardboardy.
As far as I can tell, you basicly shade in one direction? (To the middle, for the sword, for example)
Don't. :3
Swords aren't triangle shaped.
Every curve in an item should add something to an item. Even if it's only a #000001 difference. |
Is this an insult?
Will try the criticism I just don't like your insults ;-;. |
Is not an insult :/ I didn't quite remember your name, and didn't feeled like ctrl+a, ctrl+c, backspace, click reply, ctrl+v. to find out.
Pretty close for a guess, no?
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| Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Hmmmmm. Okay then apology accepted.
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hey dude the sword looks a bit better but can u make it in a different shape like curved sword.
over all the sword looks at bit better from the last time cuse it was plane the last time 
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| Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:23 pm Post subject: |
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| It was a plane last time? My shield is a cockroach and my sword was a plane?
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| Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 12:06 am Post subject: |
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| Sword is nice, shield could be worked on.
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| Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 12:06 am Post subject: |
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| Akaecius the Leapfrog wrote: | | It was a plane last time? My shield is a cockroach and my sword was a plane? |
Oh my god, I laughed.
@spider45 (dib1500)
He's asking for critique and suggestions on THIS sword. He's not asking for ideas on a new one.
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| Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:09 pm Post subject: |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:18 pm Post subject: |
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| [AM]Misery wrote: | | Akaecius the Leapfrog wrote: | | It was a plane last time? My shield is a cockroach and my sword was a plane? |
Oh my god, I laughed.
@spider45 (dib1500)
He's asking for critique and suggestions on THIS sword. He's not asking for ideas on a new one. |
well heres a suggestion for the sword. make a new 1 dude.....
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| Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:50 pm Post subject: |
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| spider45 (dib1500) wrote: | | [AM]Misery wrote: | | Akaecius the Leapfrog wrote: | | It was a plane last time? My shield is a cockroach and my sword was a plane? |
Oh my god, I laughed.
@spider45 (dib1500)
He's asking for critique and suggestions on THIS sword. He's not asking for ideas on a new one. |
well heres a suggestion for the sword. make a new 1 dude..... |
>>> Was planning on this. Also thats not a suggestion for THIS sword so you fail anyways <<;
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Up2Admin
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| Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:34 pm Post subject: |
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Make the tip longer and more narrow, it's too steep.
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| Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 8:44 am Post subject: |
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| Up2Admin wrote: | | Make the tip longer and more narrow, it's too steep. |
Mmmmk.
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