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Hitman
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text sucks
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Phixen
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 12:02 am Post subject: |
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That doesn't really help me improve it.
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Honda
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 1:46 am Post subject: |
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| tut on this phixen ?
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Phixen
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 2:10 am Post subject: |
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| Encrypted wrote: | | tut on this phixen ? |
I didn't use a tutorial. But some methods are from a few tutorials, don't remember which ones though.
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Uraguay
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I perfer V3, but it needs a bit of lighting effects, not as much as the other ones.
Dont overdo it, just give it a bit of variety in lighting and it'll look better
8/10 for the render/effects (The effects took a bit of his beefiness away)
7/10 for text (I dont know, the 'You know you want to" thing isn't all that great, I think theres better things to put there, or its just me)
Overall - 7.5/10
Looks good but has room for improvement.
I like it though.
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Phixen
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 3:58 am Post subject: |
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| ResentmenT wrote: | I perfer V3, but it needs a bit of lighting effects, not as much as the other ones.
Dont overdo it, just give it a bit of variety in lighting and it'll look better
8/10 for the render/effects (The effects took a bit of his beefiness away)
7/10 for text (I dont know, the 'You know you want to" thing isn't all that great, I think theres better things to put there, or its just me)
Overall - 7.5/10
Looks good but has room for improvement.
I like it though. |
Too much smudging on his back, lol. And I'm thinking of removing that text altogether.
UPDATED AGAIN.
I removed a lot of unnecessary layers. Which means less smudging on the guy. Light source is a little visible. Removed some text.
The more I look at it, the more it makes me think he's trying to eat the light source.
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 4:01 am Post subject: |
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You can do better.
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Kronos
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 4:01 am Post subject: |
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Its a bit sharpen but i like the v1, just remove the 'you know you want to' and put the 'Rage Phixen' There. Also, put the lightning on overlay on it. Nice blending of the layer in background.
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Phixen
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 4:04 am Post subject: |
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| Viral wrote: | You can do better.
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Really?
I always thought this was my best attempt. XP Oh, wait, which was my best attempt then?
Oh, well.
@Kronos, didn't see the update?
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Kronos
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| Phixen wrote: |
@Kronos, didn't see the update? |
Ah, replace the text, maybe...
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Phixen
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 4:08 am Post subject: |
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| Kronos wrote: | | Phixen wrote: |
@Kronos, didn't see the update? |
Ah, replace the text, maybe... |
With what? I don't like it when I remove my name in it. For obvious reasons. :3
Oh, should I make it smaller?
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 4:20 am Post subject: |
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I said put the 'Rage phixen' in the place where was 'you know you want to'.
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 4:35 am Post subject: |
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| Kronos wrote: | | I said put the 'Rage phixen' in the place where was 'you know you want to'. |
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 4:42 am Post subject: |
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Would like it more near his hair
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| Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 4:44 am Post subject: |
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| Kronos wrote: | | Would like it more near his hair |
But you wanted it where the previous text was...>.> And now you want it near his hair!? I have to redo a lot more than just move the text, lol.
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