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Channel GannoK pffrt Reputation: 129
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 9:33 pm Post subject: What do you guys think? |
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http://soundcloud.com/gannok-1/wap-final
Do you guys think I have at least some potential at making decent music? I have noticed that I have been getting better and better with making songs and what not. Although, this is only my 3rd song. I can see so much improvement already. What do you guys think?
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M.CORP Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 28
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 10:32 pm Post subject: |
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I listened to the whole thing and this is what I've thought:
-Start: Woke me up from the scream like sound (I feel sleepy after I get home)
-Middle: All right, not much difference except the scream before the new wave of sound comes in.
-Ending: The 'Uhhhh....' sound the woman made seems to be unnecessary, take that out and replace it with something that wouldn't ruin the ending and the flow.
Although you said that you've improved; I'd say a bit.
Sorry for the critics if you get offended.
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Icklorfin I post too much Reputation: -1
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 10:33 pm Post subject: Re: What do you guys think? |
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That fag wrote: | http://soundcloud.com/gannok-1/wap-final
Do you guys think I have at least some potential at making decent music? I have noticed that I have been getting better and better with making songs and what not. Although, this is only my 3rd song. I can see so much improvement already. What do you guys think? |
First part made me think you made a screamo song.
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Channel GannoK pffrt Reputation: 129
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 10:44 pm Post subject: |
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+=Marvin=+ wrote: | I listened to the whole thing and this is what I've thought:
-Start: Woke me up from the scream like sound (I feel sleepy after I get home)
-Middle: All right, not much difference except the scream before the new wave of sound comes in.
-Ending: The 'Uhhhh....' sound the woman made seems to be unnecessary, take that out and replace it with something that wouldn't ruin the ending and the flow.
Although you said that you've improved; I'd say a bit.
Sorry for the critics if you get offended. |
I appreciate it a lot. Any and all criticism helps.
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 11:05 pm Post subject: |
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I guess it all depends on what type of music a person prefers.
A Classical person like Capt. Slow will find this absolutely horrid.
Listen to the one you provided, IMHO, it seems more of just a intro like those techno remixes where it last for like 2 whole minutes before the main part starts.
Try creating something that has a story to it.
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2011 11:17 pm Post subject: |
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kls85 wrote: | I guess it all depends on what type of music a person prefers.
A Classical person like Capt. Slow will find this absolutely horrid.
Listen to the one you provided, IMHO, it seems more of just a intro like those techno remixes where it last for like 2 whole minutes before the main part starts.
Try creating something that has a story to it. |
Hmm. Thanks. I like your advice quite well. Have a rep.
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Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 2:35 pm Post subject: |
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I like the old version better...
The scream is horrible.
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