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Slappy101 I post too much Reputation: 1
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:14 pm Post subject: Abstract Grunge |
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Latest work, I haven't made anything in forever and needed to make something. I have to do a portfolio project for school so I'll be doing a lot more 3D work, but this is my latest Photoshop work (I'm not the best in it). The letters say Avery (that's my name irl). Please CnC, looking for some feedback.
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 130
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:28 pm Post subject: |
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The C4D looks too rounded from the page to be on a piece of paper like that.
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 54
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:23 pm Post subject: |
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konr wrote: | The C4D looks too rounded from the page to be on a piece of paper like that. |
I'd have to disagree with you there I think it fits very nicely.
@OP: You definitively have to work on your typography though, it's not very readable and doesn't fit at all imo
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Slappy101 I post too much Reputation: 1
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:04 pm Post subject: |
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I'll try and work on the text some more, but for the render I was trying to make a watercolor piece with some tech looking shape coming out of the paper to contrast it
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Daniel. I post too much Reputation: 72
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:13 pm Post subject: |
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It would like nicer if the C4D was more sharp looking.
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redslothx Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 13
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:09 pm Post subject: |
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it's great <3
<3 the colors and overall design.
(o.o what's with the black thing in the middle though?)
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