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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:51 am Post subject: [CnC] Socom |
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Kronos Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:38 pm Post subject: |
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It looks decent.
Good light source and blending.
I would remove the whtie and the black lines, and replace the text near the focal point and choose a color which not distracts from the focal. Also, outline.
8/10.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:43 pm Post subject: |
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| Kronos wrote: | It looks decent.
Good light source and blending.
I would remove the whtie and the black lines, and replace the text near the focal point and choose a color which not distracts from the focal. Also, outline.
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ahhh should i use a clipping mask for my text?
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Kronos Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:47 pm Post subject: |
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If you want, go ahead. it just have to be non-distracting and readable.
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~Pineapple! Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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Looks good- kinda, maybe less blur on the stock.
And get rid of the lines, as kronos said.
Looks kinda rough aswell.
Edit;
Your render w/ stock?
Just looks blurred with a few effects.
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zyndr0m I post too much
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:18 pm Post subject: |
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| No clue what socom means, but im not a big fan of the visable brushes.
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Chidori Grandmaster Cheater
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| zyndr0m wrote: | | No clue what socom means, but im not a big fan of the visable brushes. | socom is a army game
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:46 am Post subject: |
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| zyndr0m wrote: | | No clue what socom means, but im not a big fan of the visable brushes. |
yeaaa about that...i never used a brush...
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