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Daniel. I post too much Reputation: 72
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:41 am Post subject: Samus |
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Yet another tag, go ahead C&C
EDIT: I think a problem in this tag is the emptiness?
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Cryoma Member of the Year Reputation: 198
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 5:53 pm Post subject: |
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The problem is the contrast of the emptiness, or pseudo-negative-space rather, with the clusters of detail.
The amount of pseudo negative space (white) is about equal to the amount of detail-saturated areas (black), with a 1:1 ratio or say 50%-50%.
What would normally look good is a more lopsided ratio like 10%-90% or 90%-10%, so say a mostly pseudo negative space canvas with a single focal point of detail saturation, or vice versa, mostly detail saturated with a focal point of some pseudo or real negative space.
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 130
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:09 pm Post subject: |
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Ignore above. Just add more stuff. Like don't just make something and splash some shit together but instead have some sort of concept or story in your head. That way whatever you make has an actual concept behind it and because of that you can expand on it almost infinitely. Just gotta think!
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Cryoma Member of the Year Reputation: 198
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 2:47 pm Post subject: |
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Ignore above because apparently reasonable feedback should be ignored.
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Phox I post too much Reputation: 110
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:32 am Post subject: |
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the problem is that it's just a flat cloud render in the background, and your render on top of a c4d with some filters.
Look up tutorials and figure out how you can make the tag flow more and be more visually interesting.
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Helium Newbie cheater Reputation: 0
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 12:30 am Post subject: |
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The way it blends makes the background look lower quality in my opinnion
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