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Daniel.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 8:49 pm    Post subject: Cabal Reply with quote



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yea it's pretty shit

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 2:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks pretty good, the colors are nice, good flow and c4d effects. The main issue i see is that the bg is totaly not fitting the render well, and ofcourse the whole piece is way too blurry, focal needs to stand out more. Good work anyway :)
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 10:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kronos wrote:
Looks pretty good, the colors are nice, good flow and c4d effects. The main issue i see is that the bg is totaly not fitting the render well, and ofcourse the whole piece is way too blurry, focal needs to stand out more. Good work anyway Smile

thanks! I didn't know how to get lighting in

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Honestly I disagree with Kronos.
I think that the 3d elements are not placed correctly since some parts are way too sharp for the rest of the composition.
Also the bottom light effect is not helping into focusing on the main thing which is the character in here.
Also the thick white border kills it.

What I would do:

to the 3D elements: I would apply a very strong motion blur and make the character look like it is just landing with a great impact by adding some motion lines.

to the lighting: focus it more on the center of the composition is a more round manner.

To the border: make a thin black boder instead of the white one or maybe a thick black movie caption like border.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 11:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

No border please. Use dodge/burn to make lighting perfect etc I'll give more detail when I'm back.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 1:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

konr wrote:
No border please. Use dodge/burn to make lighting perfect etc I'll give more detail when I'm back.

was waiting for you to C&C took you long enough asshole <3

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