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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 5
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 9:56 am Post subject: Eclipse :D - V2 up |
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I tried to remove/fix the things Connor told me about and added more smudging in it since it looked so empty without the stuff Connor pointed:O
V2:
C&C please.
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 130
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 10:03 am Post subject: |
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I don't like it. I can see another dot (White circle) to the right, supposedly to moon ? Well, sorry, but that wouldn't work. Because an eclipse is when the moon is directly infront of the sun. The pen tool lines don't look good, they look tacky, and the smudging at the right hand side (Grey/white on soft light?) doesn't look good either, because I can blatently see exactly what you've done.
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 5
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 10:08 am Post subject: |
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Connor wrote: | I don't like it. I can see another dot (White circle) to the right, supposedly to moon ? Well, sorry, but that wouldn't work. Because an eclipse is when the moon is directly infront of the sun. The pen tool lines don't look good, they look tacky, and the smudging at the right hand side (Grey/white on soft light?) doesn't look good either, because I can blatently see exactly what you've done. |
:O Well that other dot was supposedly another heavenly body but that works too. Uhh can you elaborate the stuff about pentool more? :o I'll try to fix that smudging thing then.
Thanks for that :D
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 10:25 am Post subject: |
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Well, the pentool lines don't look good because they don't suit the concept. The concept is about the sky being dark all except the edges of the eclipse, which is of course the sun and the moon in alignment. The lines have no reason to be there.
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 5
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 10:32 am Post subject: |
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Connor wrote: | Well, the pentool lines don't look good because they don't suit the concept. The concept is about the sky being dark all except the edges of the eclipse, which is of course the sun and the moon in alignment. The lines have no reason to be there. |
:o Interesting view of it, I need to think about the concept more I guess.
Thanks~
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